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Oh, you got me there! Hell, sometimes it

Well, the novel-length review above is mine... I forgot that I wasn't loged in, I still don't have a new computer!

Ok. 'Train wreck' no more! You have an excellent grasp of archetypes and their possible functions, even of motivations. Makes a hell of a lot of sense that Gaia herself would intervene if Volsie is killing the planet itself. Now you've got me reeled in. I honestly wasn't trying to be insulting in my last review, I simply couldn't find any other simile to describe how that first chapter made me feel.

Interesting beginning.

Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Oooo, Doctor Who is amazing, which is kinda bad for me to admit, my ex used to rib me for it! I'd settle down on a Saturday night to watch it on BBC One, and he'd just laugh at me! Oh, so now I'm guessing that the man with the Scythe is Death himself or Morpheus, or infact some sort of God. At first I thought the little girl was Hermione herself. Actually I still think that a little. I'm glad in some shape or form, Hermione escaped her horrific death. Can you actually AK yourself? I've wondered about that for a while....

So the song seems to be a major give away, oh I did like it! I'm glad it's not going to be all darkness, and no light. I must admit I was disturbed by Voldemort, but alas it is to be expected of him if he won the war. I think in his extreme madness, he probably would have done those things, but never the less, it was still unexpected, but I liked the horror factor, when I was reading it.

I'm looking forward to more Sweets! Great chapter!

~LadyVoldemort87~

This is an interesting story. I can't wait to read more.

I'm liking it more and more. You always have interesting ideas. Ok, anybody out there know Utopia's weakness. Is it lemons (I make a killer lemon pound cake), strawberries, expensive perfume, fine wine, drop dead gorgeous men (ok, I already knew that one). I think I heard Wormtail in the walls last night. Maybe I can send him over to spy. Sigh! I guess I'll just have pour myself that glass of wine & continue to live vicariously through your stories.

Oh, I forgot I had an idea for a title. "Returning from the River Styx". Ok, just an idea. I know you're perfectly capable of thinking up a title. Just thought less time spent trying to decide on a title might equate into more time to write the story. XXOO

YAY! WAITING FOR MORE! PLEASE!