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Chapter 5: Hermione has been transferred into a very difficult new life, with burn wounds and all her family members dead. She is certainly paying for her second

I like Gamay...she is such a sweet elf. I can't imagine how stressed that would have made Hermione. Poor Hermione. I can't wait for her to meet good old (um...young) Lucius...He will like her. She will have him for her lover!

Remus is sleeping with me, not being stalked by me! He is a sweetie poo!

Severus is stalked by many. I share him. I am nothing special...he barely notices me anymore...not even when I hum the theme song to "Secret Agent Man" as he walks by in the hallway...it's sad!...or when I confessed my LOVE for him to the whole great hall at the Welcome-Back feast and blow him a kiss...*wipes eyes*...or when I had the Cherubs arranged by Lockhart sing him a love song in front of the Advanced Potions Class...*sniffles*...doesn't even get a rise out of him anymore. *pouts*

Adoring this story, can't wait to read more. The vineyard elves could use muslin, when I make home meade wine, the must is put thru muslin to strain out any bits and pieces from the fruit musch like jam is turned to jelly

Perhaps the French elves are dressed differently than the English ones? Rather than wearing non-clothing items repurposed, perhaps it is enough to wear a simple uniform in France as a 'mark of enslavement'? Or perhaps it is a Grangier family custom that the elves serve by choice rather than by compulsion? I can't think of anything for the vineyard elves but feedsacks or something like that. Ick. And I am very flattered you went with my suggestion for a title, which was not a dig, as the deities in question are a major influence and NOT a 'clumsy plot device'.

Ahm... The Anon last time was me? Just forgott to reveal myself. :-) Right, so a late review because I do have technical problems that will hopefully resolve within a week...

Loved your update, as usual! Very nice how you inserted her in the past, this will not arise suspicion! Especially since she's adopted, I suppose she's still muggleborn? Hah, dear Lucius will not know what hit him! Suppose he will think that she's a pureblood in the beginning? Of course that would make it a lot easier for him to fall in love!

Mother Nature and Death are quiet powerful in your story! I mean obviously they are given who they are, but to be able to turn back time... That's something else! Or is it AU? Not that it would be terribly important for the story, but I am always wondering.

But I must admit that I find it very sad that she forgets everything of her former life. No memories of her family, Harry, Ron... That's really hard! Okay, I guess that it would be harder for her to remember them, when she has no recollection of her life before, she cannot suffer from the things that happened, but still. I guess it will it make it easier for her to fall for Lucius, too...

Waiting for the update tomorrow... Yay...

Amazing!

Chapter 3: Okay, I now assume the skeletal man wasn

Chapter 4: I don

hey! love the story...but...
Healer Rosseau! I'm a Rosseau ^^

Let me start out by saying...Who would flame you? I mean really, people do this? Amazing.... I can not think of one nasty thing to say to you, snapesgoddess, Lexy Malfoy or anyone who write for the enjoyment of themselves or others. Sorry I just find it insane that you guys have to put up with that crap.

Now for your story. BLOODY AMAZING, I LOVE IT! I will be anxiously awaiting your weekly updates. YAY FOR NON CANNON!