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Thank You Utopia! I was swooning in anticipation for Lucius to arrive! Snape..oh...I just wanna mooch his sweet face. Good deed. *Sigh* Until next week! xoxox

I like please keep writing!

So they've finally met. I can't wait to see how things develop....and what house she's put into. Oh and liked how you through in a little interaction with Riddle there. Clever that. lol

You're not auctioning off Lucius' virginity? Awwww... what a pity :(

I'm going to read on. I look forward to some Marauder ass-kicking and Snape's happily ever after.

-----Prologue-----

That was really dark

Oh Utopia! I feel sooooo bad for net reviewing twice! I loved your updates and it's not that I stopped reading your story. You were just too fast updating! I wanted to go back and reread, and voil

So now she's all set for school! Gotten her familiar and everything. Even "met" Mr. Riddle! It's very good that Tom wont be in charge hehe!!

Liked how she suddenly got all "french" when she gets angry. Really cool! And I hope that the assistant wont be there for long!
And now she's met her future BF. Isn't he charming, abit uncomfortable with the elf but. Who has he recently lost? Since he put his mourning robes away recently?

Loved it! Now you have gives us a taste for more with him, so I hope he will be frequent in the story from now on!


And yes, I'm a LOTR fan. I chose the nick for a reason hehe, It is Female and roughly translated means "Luna" In English. I chose it because I love the moon and well the translation of my name didn't exist lol.
And I know what you mean, if you can't write well, then don't!
I think it means the same in both Elvish languages actually, but not sure.

So Severus is her surrogate little brother, including brother wands; Tom missed his chance at the phoenix core, and Lucius is just recently out of mourning? Excellent detailing in the new universe! I love the idea of Adamina still having the wand Ollivander's ancestor sold her, gives an incredible feeling of continuity to the story. Of course, if she's 206, that puts her date of birth at shortly before the American Revolution, doesn't it? Wonder if she has a few stories about Malfoy's ancestors as well.

I am quite deeply OUTRAGED! APPALLED! SCANDALIZED! AND SLIGHTLY STUPEIFIED! YOU have the AUDACITY to mess around with my Sevvie-poo! I am scarred for life. I'm never going to be the same. After all I did to get his attention...nothing when...I wave my arms around when he starts handing out detentions in class asking him to pick me...when he gives the potion instructions, I say "NO IT'S THOSE DAMN VOICES AGAIN!"...no attention from him! *pouts*

Remus loves me though. We share chocolate and exchange hugs. And more than that...He is my cuddle-wolf.

NOW that that has been covered! I loved this chapter. I love that Hermione got Sev the wand that suited him and that it was the wand that Tom was supposed to get...I love that Hermione got Harry's wand! HORRAY SEVERUS! AND finally Lucius is there. *happy dance clapping hands* I hope Hermione isn't in Gryffindor. I hope that she is a Slytherin so she can have plenty of time with the very HOT headboy. Well, I have my Remus and I wouldn't trade him for anyone.

Grief and mourning are very difficult to write with sincerety. I appreciate how you are accomplishing that in this story. I'm looking forward to reading more.