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January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
More than a year without an update, (sigh). Utopia, we miss you!
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December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want LUcius and Hermione action...it will be hot...poor Lucius...you're going to be mean to him for his first time.
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter nine and previous chapters too
I really enjoy the potential of this story.
You have done a great job of describing the characters and giving us a sense of their personalities.
I eagerly await further installments to this story.
Well done--keep up the good work!
I really enjoy the potential of this story.
You have done a great job of describing the characters and giving us a sense of their personalities.
I eagerly await further installments to this story.
Well done--keep up the good work!
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say i am loving this story so far. I also love what you are doing with Lucius, a very interesting perspective of of his character.
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December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad you are back in business, my sympathies on the obsolete computer-thing. I have the same problem with my machine. Good transitional chapter, and you've nicely set up several possible sources of both comfort and conflict, as always. I wonder which house she'll be in? Will you just toss a dice to decide? or will she go to Ravenclaw? I always thought she should have been in that House.
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December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well that was fun! :) i totally loved the name of the chapter that would not fit! :) well i totally love albus' planning and ploting i think this is going to be so much fun. okay i am now really looking forward to another chapter and i do hope that it is really soon so it will help me through finals! dear hermione i love that you have he being so proper and i really love that lucius is too! i SO want another chapter--do you have to wait to post it?
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Take as long as you need; we'll wait. Your stories are worth it.
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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6: Even in her bereavement, poor Hermione is beset by selfish, unscrupulous people. Now why is Corin acting so strangely? I thought it might be that he had a crush on Hermione, but you said he didn
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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just re-read it all, and I'm suddenly wondering if Corin Travere had something to do with the fire, from his reactions to Hermione the day of the funeral? It would make a twist if he is in league with the irritating cousin.
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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
re: the third time I've read it' comment--all too often, if I read a story more than once all I notice are the errors, once I've absorbed the plot and characterizations. Your stories very seldom do that to me, I've found. Only one of several reasons why you are becoming one of my favorite fanfic authors!