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for Another Dark Star

by AlabasterPrincess

schedule February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!
PLEASE DONT LET SEV DIE!!

I love this story!
The characters are real! They are 3D, its not a silly flowery romance!
Its gripping and always leaving me wanting more!!

Love this story! Cant wait for an update, dont want it to end!! :)
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sad one this time. Sadie's hormones playing up again I see, cos she's not one to usually give in to tears, even in such a situation. Sleepy Hadrian reminds me of sleepy Sebby, and that's not good! Good on Sadie wanting to help however she can, even if it means breaking her own conscious and breaking into Sev's lab. We all know hat he'll have potions and such in there to save a life in serious danger, i.e. like Arthur's snake bite (hint, hint). Methinks tis a good job she has got that phial of Nagini's venom. She is well known in the Auror cicles as a decent potions brewer, so it makes sense that she would do what she can to create an anti dote, just in case. ;)

I am sad that the story is coming to an end, but with the end you have in mind, yes other readers, I have first hand insight to the END!!!, I don't think many will be unhappy. XD I know, I'm a tease! But you love me for it hun xx
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story, and I must say that I really enjoyed it so far. It's really good. I can't wait to read more!
Keep up the good work!
schedule January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yet again more wonderful chapters. Here's what I thought of some of what you have wrote (taking a leaf out of Barbra's book).

"How was it that with one look she could make him feel like he
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! Its beautiful, yet till i find it sooo sad!!
Abso love it! The characters are real, and 3D, not unrealistic and flat!
Cant wait for the next update!!!
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay more PPPP!!! Glad to hear Isabella is ok now and with Hadrian now walking, they have got their hands full!! Thank the Gods for the small mercy called Winky!!
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just read the last two chapters together!!Im glad they are alright!!!
I love this story!! I love snape!!!
Cant wait for the next update!!!
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! That actually made me CRY!!!
That was sooo sad!!!
Poor Sadira!!
Abso loved the last to chapters!!!
Please update soon!!
That was tooo much of a cliff hanger!!!
person LadyNightlord
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing fanficition, please keep it up!! :)

I look forward to reading more of my favourite Potion's Master and the absolutely brilliant Sadira!
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another brilliant chapter up-date!!!! More please and soon!!!!!!!!!!

Love the new up-date on the apple idea we talked about. xx