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November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahahah! that was cute! very good for not being you're native language ;) *looking for a lolli*
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok That was funny!
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh loved that!!!
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's always nice to see these types of stories. There really aren't enough of them. They're just too good to pass up. Don't worry too much about the grammar. It was only noticable in one or two places.
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice!
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... very NICE story! I like it quite a bit but it could use some editing for grammar and general... *waves hand around vaguely* something-ness... =)