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for Polyjuice

by Dazzlious

schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful chapter. I think it is great that the truth is out there now and that Hermione is talking to her two best friends Ron & Harry again. I look forward to reading more to find out what happens. I am curious as to whether Hermione will tell Professor Snape that ron isn't the father and that she doesn't know who it is because the person used polyjuice to become Ron.
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was a TOTALLY AWSOME chapter, the big event. you wrote very well, now the mystry of who the father is. I can't to see what they discover, or does lucius tell all.
person Elphaba
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Who would have thought I nice Snape!
person Elphaba
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo-Hoo! one problem solved. And it is Malfoy just the wrong one! LOL
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure their new-found guilt is going to make the boys uber-protective and young Draco is going to spend more time as a ferret? I have to say that I laughed out loud at the idea of them planning outings around access to plumbing! So, when does 'Simon' make an appearance? He's had one near miss with the potion, will he have another? And will she tell Snape the latest so he lets up on Ron? He's smart enough to figure out who has galleons to buy the stuff.
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Disappointment is not fun. At least I was warned that Lucius wouldn't even receive honorable mention in this chapter! I OBJECT TO CHAPTERS WITHOUT LUCIUS or at least SIMON! It's not FAIR! I need Lucius. *hugs Lucius plushie* It is Malfoy's baby...just not the Malfoy they have in mind. *shakes finger at author* I desperately need LMHG time in the next chapter. I vote he comes to the school as him under some guile and meets with Hermione and teases her and lets her know that he knows she's having a BABY! *pouts* PWEASE!
person Rosamund
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was good of them to FINALLY confront her and get to the bottom of things. Well, she did that but at least they helped confirm it. Great job!
person Rosamund
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wait till she tells them about whats his "name" and having sex, taking care of her and the baby, etc... :) That will be fun!!!
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So they've figured out it was someone polyjuiced. I wonder if Hermione will confide in Snape? He may know some way to help. I can't wait for more!
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I look forward to reading the next one.