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for Polyjuice

by Dazzlious

schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the one i have been waiting, thank you
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed reading this, and cannot wait for whatever is going to happen. You're awesome!
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, now how to get her out? Portkey in a quill, charmed to her touch? Send a school elf after her? Giant owl? How about Hagrid; he's immune to most spells? Have Narcissa turn her loose? Or Draco? Or she can bean Lucius with a lamp and walk out?
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I hope that Lucius will let Hermione at least write to her friends so that they know she is alright since he won't allow her to return to school. I look forward to reading more.
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i can understand why he doesn't want to have her leave, she might not come backt to him. Is he going to ask her to promise to marry him for her to be released to take her exams.
person Rosamund
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter...how come the boys didn't use the map? ;) Lucius needs to be taken down a few pegs, I can't wait for Hermione's wrath. Lustful wrath, that is...or I hope she at least lets him kiss her.
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*wipes tear* I'm so happy! Lucius is such a good crazy in love guy...

How dare Hermione not want to stay with him?

Poor Severus. He tried.

But Mr. Hot-Pants won't let her leave...makes me smile...I would stay with Mr. Hot-Pants if I got to have him a time or two...or two hundred...or more...really.

Your update made my day. Thank you!
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please please please update soon! I can't wait to see what she decides to do.
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.