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for Polyjuice

by Dazzlious

schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. It sounds like Hermione is in labor. Patiently waiting to read more soon.
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please udpate soon.
person Anon
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I get the feeling that my doubts as to your Lucius displease you somewhat? Having once been stalked for almost two years, that sort of attitude makes me a little jumpy, you see. I had to finally send over three of my five (very large) brothers to 'explain' my feelings to him. And a sheriff's deputy to make sure things didn't get out of hand (My brothers can be a little overprotective). Two restraining orders and a black eye later, things are very nice, now, thanks. How soon will Hermione realize she's in labor and has been for most of the day?
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
by the way, the Anon above is me, sorry. Issues with logging in or something.
person Rosamund
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great how the two came around to be there for Hermione. And yes, still cannot WAIT to read Draco's reaction...it will be priceless!
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It may be short but it was a great chapter :) tears, shock, the baby's approval, heartfelt declarations, more tears... Finally they can move forward, maybe Hermione can go back to school? Hmmm... I'm looking forward, but also dreading Draco's reaction.
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Patiently waiting to read more. I am glad that Hermione has accepted Lucius' proposal.
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet and loving at the moment, yes, but obsession nearly always has a darker side, as a kidnpping illustrates. Well, if nothing else, we know that he can afford child support payments.
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lucius isn't bad...he is just playful like a kitten!

I loved this chapter. Yes, it was short, but if it was any longer, I think it wouldn't have been good if it carried on any longer.

I'm so happy for them.

*hugs Lucius plushie*