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for Polyjuice

by Dazzlious

schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story! Thank you for taking the time to write this. ~VampireSeductress
person celesumi
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really loved this story! i love how sneaky and just plain amazing Lucius is :) I love the creativity that you had when writing this story! Wish Draco had a little more involvement :) i just love those malfoy men :)
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOORAY! *dances about* A BABY BOY! I heart babies. YAY WEDDING! YAY bad man who wanted to hurt Mione getting hexed. YAY LUCIUS! I'm so happy! *hugs self before picking up Lucius plushie for some good cuddling time*
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
Especially loved Snape being nice when there's a real need to, just as I'd picture him. And anal sex as a pain relieve during labor, a very Malfoy idea... :P
I just think you might have made a little mistake in the ages in the newspaper thing at the end? Ginny is 16 and Luna 18 although it'd have thought both would be 17 or atleast 16 and 17?
xx
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
totally awsome story, really liked it. sorry to say that it is over. thank you for writting it
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I rather like the news items as a plot device, and it seems that Hermione's education is going to be completed sporadically, if she keeps getting pregnant! Dholohov, though? Did I miss something? I must have, somewhere, and I'm sorry about that.
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great epilogue. I enjoyed reading this story and loved how you ended it with the birth announcement of their daughter and son with their wedding announcement in the middle along with an article by Rita Skeeter. I was a bit surprised though that she was even allowed anywhere near the wedding since no one really likes her.
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY BABY! YAY DADDY LUCIUS! *hugs self happily* Must read the next chapter. I love DADDY LUCIUS!
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I WANT MORE LUMIONE MADE BABIES! Draco will be a good older brother. He is so sweet.

SO happy for them...*hugs Mr. Horse (my stuffed horse friend)*...I just want them to have more babies. I *HEART* Lumione babies.
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BABY is coming! Oh I hope Lucius will be there.

Sorry for being gone for so long. Medicines have been making me not myself...still not wholly back on track...and then Christmas, I found myself with no internet.