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for Polyjuice

by Dazzlious

person Elphaba
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well well well. Luc gets more devious, who'd a thunk! It shall be very interesting to see what happens!
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really interested to see where you take this. Lucius' behaviour is crossing the line from obsessive to requiring treatment at St Mungo's! What's going to happen in the rest of his life, if he's spending so much time at Hogwarts? Is Draco going to catch him? How is he getting around the one-hour time limit? I'm surprised he hasn't just abducted her and called it done.
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I might push you out of the way...How dare you be in front of me? I need hugs from a sexy man with long flaxen, blonde hair! AND A PIMP CANE!

Where was Lucius? I'm sad he is not back to do what he does best...Lucius just must go back...Hermione need SEXUAL HEALING from Lucius...like me...

*sniffles*

Please update soon!
person linmo
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I guess now it leaves lucius to set things straight?
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How frustratingly confusing this must be for all involved. I love it. lol More please?
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do have one question: If during polyjuice sex a person is completely in the form of the original, would the children resemble the true body of the impregnator or the body they were wearing at the time? Is the transformation down to a genetic level, or is it purely physical appearance and characteristics that are duplicated? And yes, I think Lucius should get some different hairs and give it another try!
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful story. I can't wait to read more. I think it would be interesting if Lucius would get some of Harry's hair and become him to be with Hermione.
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome! I can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
long blonde hair...grey eyes...pretty voice...great accent...great lips for kissing...clothes that beg to be taken off...Where was I? Ah yes...all of the fine Malfoy traits...obviously produces cute children...(See Draco)

What is happening with Lucius? He better hurry up and come up with a plan and not do something dopey again...poor Lucius...he needs hugs! I could give him hugs. I can't wait to see where this is going!