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for Polyjuice

by Dazzlious

schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*blusters and flails arms* Of course, I am on Lucius' side. He is totally the hot one in the relationship.

I figured out how he got rich; he just set up a kissing and hugging booth. I spent many galleons there. It was AWESOME! I miss it...*pouts*

And Hermione, that skank, better want Lucius. He is a much more appropriate choice. I wonder how he will find out that Hermione is pregnant. Will she tell Simon or will he hear it from Snape? How will he react to her being with his baby? HOORAY FOR VIRILE LUCIUS! *does a happy dance*

Simon = Lucius...the question is how will she feel when she knows the truth and that he deceived her...*tutting* Not good I suppose.

Hope to read more soon. Am lovin' this much.
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was a surprising turn of events. I can't wait to see what comes next. You have got write about her telling ron, and with ron not enought the 'Ron'.
person Byrony
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I was wondering how Lucius would get with her again after his horrid faux pas... well you came up with quite a slippery solution.. Were you sorted in Slytherin perhaps??? I have to say that I am really enjoying this story, you never know what Lucius will do next.
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW! Go Hermione. Give Lucius HEAD! He needed it...poor blonde angel.

Makes me sad that she wouldn't be with him just because he is Lucius! *does happy Lucius dance*

Hope to read more soon. Lovin' this...
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I hope that Lucius can get Hermione to be with him again and get her to go all the way as well. I think it would be great if, after a few more times posing as Simon that while they are making love, that he would change back to his own self. Then, he can confess that he loves her very much and wants to be with her. She might hate him for a bit, but then she will realize that she loves him as well.
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nope, not your beta; I've never published here. Flattered you'd think so, though. Very curious, that's all, and all those pesky little details keep popping into my head at the oddest times. I'm glad you had Lucius pull back at her reluctance, and that he hads an appreciation for her own needs above his, although he is still one man in need of some therapy! Good chapter.
person Elphaba
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Man! Mione is in so much trouble! LOL
person linmo
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't help imaigining one morning Hermione wakes up and finds out she is in Lucius' arms...lol He wants to love her in his own body, doesn't he?
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That damn dirty Lucius...I'm proud of him...why couldn't it be me? *looks sad* Of course, I would rathe rhe have that gorgeous blonde hair and grey eyes...and this is the wrong way to go...Lucius is far too attractive!

And I am still waiting...*pouts*...can't wait to read more! Gotta love Lucius like this!