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for Polyjuice

by Dazzlious

person linmo
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very surprising turn. Remind me of Senior Project. Technically it was the polyjucied body had sex with Hemione, how did that end up become Lucius' baby? I hardly thought Snape would be the first helper she would be seeking.
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I hope that Hermione decides to keep the baby, but what will she do when Ron claims to have never slept with her. Also, what will Lucius reaction be when he finds out that she is pregnant. I look forward to reading the next chapter to see what happens.
person Elphaba
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh My! That was interesting. So 'mione is pg, BUT since Luc was polyjuiced would it look like Ron or Luc? And...Ron is going to die of shock when she says something to him. Evil Cackle!
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh. Lucius is in so much trouble. If she goes through with it, it's going to be fairly obvious that the baby isn't a Weasley when it's born. lol Great update, I can't wait to see what happens!
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm always devoted to Lucius...*sighs*...Ron will tell her right away that they never did anything...then what will she do? She should tell SImon first. He will be happy because he is Lucius in disguise! Lucius wants a baby, but how will he feel about having sired it while in another's body?
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I look forward to reading the next one.
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I so can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon. I love that fact that she has found a relationship with "simon'. Now is Lucius still married and i can't see where this goes. It is very intriging. Sorry about my spelling. I am sorry to say that I want a bigger chapter.
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! She's pregnant! and is it Ron's? Theorethically, it could be due to the polyjuice... but does polyjuice affect sperm? If not then it's Lucius....

The suspense is killing me!

:D
person Byrony
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH Poor, Poor Hermione.. and of course Ron will not know WTF she is talking about when she tells him she is pregnant. You would think Lucius would have been smart enought to cast a contraceptive spell.. I thought Slytherins always looked out for # 1... So you are a Gryffindor are you.. that is what I am always sorted as too.. of course my husband swears that I am Slytherin.. ; )
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Telling Ron he's going to be a father when he has'nt slept with her is going to be an interesting argument, I think, unless Severus mentions it to Lucius first?