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for Polyjuice

by Dazzlious

person Byrony
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW... methinks the Golden Trio is about to become the splintered trio.. even though Ron is not responsible, he is still a worthless git. Doesn't bother to talk to Hermione and try to find out why she thinks he is the father. He just acts like the jackass tyhat he is.. Not much of a Ron fan if you did not guess.. Good chapter. Now what will Lucius do?
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH. Oh my. This is one of those things that's going to worse before it gets better isn't it? lol Great update, I can't wait for more!!
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Oh what a tangled web we weave, when first we practice to deceive!" That's the first thing I though when I got to the end of this chapter. Fantastic update. I can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, Lucius is in quite a mess. This could really end badly for him if Ron decides to do the 'right' thing :P Poor Hermione... Love it :D
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was great. I hope that Hermione talks to Ron soon and that he tells her that he wasn't with her in the room of requirement. Harry will probably back him up since they were together. If Ron rejects her by telling her there is no way he could have fathered the baby, then maybe she will start to think it was someone else. I look forward to reading more soon.
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, once he
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm anticipating and at the same time dreading the moment Hermione tells Ron that she's pregnant from their disastrous encounter :D
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lucius needs to put down the shovel and back away from the hole he's digging, because it's getting way too deep for him to fix! I'm glad you have him realizing how he hurt her, but how is he going to get rid of Narcissa? Divorce? Poison? A nasty shopping accident?
person Rosamund
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update...How will Hermione find out? Hmm...so many possibilities. Update soon!
person Byrony
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh the plot thickens... I love the line about getting rid of Narciss.. LOL.. typical Malfoy.. ; )