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for Polyjuice

by Dazzlious

schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*waves arms wildly* Of course, I am on Lucius' side. I want him to be a good papa! He loves Hermione! HE wants more babies with her! He just might not know it yet. Hooray for a blonde baby! (PLLLEASE?) Lucius was missing for the most part in this chapter, and I object to that! STRENUOUSLY! *pants* I love how Snape is being so sweet and supportive of Hermione. And poor ignorant 'Mione doesn't realize that Simon wants her to be big and round because he knows that the baby is his. Hermione needs to be loved up by Lucius (as Lucius)! I want her to smack Lucius' bum! It would be good for him! AND me (if I got to smack it). But I digress. I loved this chapter even without all the Lucius goodness! (which needs to be in the next chapter please?)
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An avuncular Snape is a refeshing change in characterization, and quite original--I like it! Yes, you've answered most of my questions. Now about that nasty shopping accident for Narcissa...? (insert evil smile here)
person Anon
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Elphaba
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh My, this is what I see happening...Ka-Boom!
person Elphaba
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting Can't wait for the next chapter
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is that this chapter was way to short. =(.

Update soon. I am enjoying this.
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All right, when they get all the screaming out of the way, who will think of polyjuice as a possibility? When Harry confirms Ron's alibi, will Hermione even speak to them again? Will Ginny side with her or the boys, and will she figure out that there is a fourth party at work here? When will she let Snape know she's keeping the baby, and how will he react? And yes, I was waiting for the latest chapters to be posted, you've got me interested.
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A MALFOY IS THE FATHER, BUT OF COURSE, HERMIONE DOESN'T KNOW THAT! But he is, and he is happy to be a papa again. What will Simon do now? Yay, for Ron being wholly honest with Hermione. Yay, for Lucius being there watching the whole thing. BOO, for him not sweeping her up and carrying her away to his manor to RAVISH HER! *falls off bed* What will Hermione think when the baby is born with pretty blonde hair and grey eyes (I hope!)? Will she put one and one together, or will she think immediately that it's Draco's baby? On a side note, I want to give Draco hugs.

Yay, for Ron not accepting responsibility for a baby that is not his! Lucius needs to go to Hermione, after he gets rid of Narcissa! He and Hermione need to be together, and he agress about it! That he and she would be a stunning couple!
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I had a feeling Ron would deny everything and now that Harry knows I believe that Hermione will soon realize that Ron is telling the truth because he was with Harry the night she claims to have been with him. I look forward to reading the next chapter to see what Harry does.