Oh god! This was so good. You know how to play with words. Although I was not happy how malfoy started the relationship but by the end of the story I loved their chemistry. I laughed so hard in last 2-3 chapters.
I liked the idea of the plot for this story, and I stuck it out to figure out what was going to happen, but I felt so strange while reading this. Lucius was so obsessed with Hermione that it was creepy, especially when having conversations where he was trying to explain how this happened, and I kept trying to figure out if he was meant to come off that way or if I was supposed to believe that he was the romantic hero for basically raping Hermione over and over again (sex without full consent of who she's with)--which was not warned for, btw--and then kidnapping her.
Oh my, I love this! Lucius!!
Bravo! Thanks for the great smut too.