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May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hi
please update
i'm curious about whats going to happen
please update
i'm curious about whats going to happen
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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Have just found this hidden in my bookmarks file. This was an excellent start to what could be a very promising story. I hope you are continuing with it!
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh man that was good i bet she didn't cheat on him well maybe who knows i really like it either way this is pretty damn good i hope the next chapters coming soon along with an explanation of whether or not she really cheated i do really really like this story i really hope you update soon four star rating all the way!
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start. I can't wait to see more- I'm hooked. As for the baby I don't so much care about the gender so long as it has that Malfoy hair I love so.
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A Friendly Reminder
Just thought I'd leave you a note to let you know your disclaimer is lacking. According to the Terms of Service you need to include that you are in fact making no money from writing this story, and that you do not own the people involved. Also it helps if you specify the fandom you are writing about.
Even though this story is about fictional characters, it needs to be known that they are not yours and you
Just thought I'd leave you a note to let you know your disclaimer is lacking. According to the Terms of Service you need to include that you are in fact making no money from writing this story, and that you do not own the people involved. Also it helps if you specify the fandom you are writing about.
Even though this story is about fictional characters, it needs to be known that they are not yours and you
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far, I think that it should be a boy just because you almost never see Draco and Hermione have a boy together. So please please please make it a little boy. [=
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! The only issue would be that Draco's eyes are grey, not blue! I'll be sticking with this one, I can't wait to learn more about the affair!
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good start, though you might want to check your format, was bit confusing.
I personally like long chapters, so i thought it was a bit short but it was good can't wait for more, keep up the good work.
Leila
I personally like long chapters, so i thought it was a bit short but it was good can't wait for more, keep up the good work.
Leila
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked the beginning so definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Haven't found a good D/Hr fic in awhile so do us all a big favour and update soon :)
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like the story so far! lol. i say let it be a girl ;)