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Soooo need chapter 16!!! So Draco is giving in?

wow. rather interesting story. quite interested in seeing you finish it.

I have stumbled upon this story several times. Each time i start to read it because of its interesting plot, but stop when Harry goes goth and gets some tattoos and piercings. I just think it's ridiculous that the only way people can show that Harry is being rebellious is if he completely changes his wardrobe so drastically. Anyway, interesting story, but i could do without the goth

Yay, glad you're back to posting - you got a working pc :D
Liked!

I like the story and where it's going, but I must admit I'm completely distracted by the breaks in the story for little authors comments. I think those would be much better left in an authors note before or after the chapter, not interspersed within the story itself.

Love this story and I can't wait to read more! Hope you get a computer soon :D

I think your story rocks! All except when you had to go into detail about Harry and his friends super spectacular outfits. I loved the descriptions, and it's probably fun as hell to imagine and then write... it just takes up a lot of room in a chapter. BUT you have confined that type of details to only one chapter so it's not a problem and I'm not upset or telling you to NOT do it, it's just my own little preference for stories and you can completely ignore this part of the review because YOU are the author. :) I read your A.N.'s and I'm sorry you are getting flamed for NO reason. Why don't all those reviewers take their flames to the stories that don't even spell the title of their story correctly and then write the summary in I.M. code. RAAAWWRR! People like that piss me off. Sorry for he rant. I like how you described Harry as being small and a little on the feminine side. I hope he is the bottom in this story. :D Another preference of mine. I was confused by Draco's seemingly docile personality. I hope we (the readers) get to know him better in the coming chapters. What am I saying of course we will! I just suck at reviews if you didn't notice. I recently got flamed for a REVIEW and called a pervert by an author on fanfiction.net in the Mature section no less! So yeah. I've lost my confidence in writing honest reviews with new authors now... Anyways! I hope you can update again soon and I'll be looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Until then! :)

Hey Listen,
I like your story so far. I just have a couple of things to say.
One - Your chapters are a little short, but I've seen worse.
Two - No offense, but it really piss me off when you interrupt the story for personal commentary. I thought for a second I'd reached the end of this Chapter and was going to the next one when I notice it was just an unnecessary interruption. If you're worried about how the story is going get a beta to check the spelling and grammar and plot and ect.
Aside from that I really do like your story. Keep trying and go for the beta!!!

Soooo need chapter 15!!! Oh Dumbledore you are slipping!

I like your story. Everyone is deliciously OCC, but I love how you kept Ron as one of the GOOD guys (I get so tired of Ron-bashing!). You have a wonderful way of threading the different plot lines together and out again and I love how the story moves along -- fabulous pacing. One question -- where is Severus Snape ??