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for Naga Inheritance

by TenariRose

person bahaqueen
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Its a bit rusty with grammar and all, but I am enjoying it. Can't wait to read more.
person nettie
schedule May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg your story is amazing you must update i gotta know what happens please please pretty please!!!!
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So, I was re-reading this, and I read your comment on the twin thing. To be identical, they only have to come from the same egg, which is usually why they look identical. My twin and I look identical, but we're really fraternal.
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Harry!!! Soooo need chapter 19!!!
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nice work keep it up
person Sayu
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, i read 1 through 18 straight through and i must say, im impressed. Now i dont know if its because you got a beta or not but there is some major improvement in the writing and all those multipul author notes covering the first few chapters are not covering the others. So im happy. :) That had been the most annoying. lol. I like the story so far. what are the griffs going to do to ron for not hexing harry? Cant wait for next chapter.
schedule August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG!! I love this story! I can't wait til you update! When will they bond? When will Harry find out that Ron is still loyal? Will Harry kill Dumbles? And when he does, will it be before or after Voldie?
schedule August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo -crie of pain, due to the wait- haha just kidding.
Just write more haha i still like ti and awe its so sweet that draco wants to wait till their married.... poor harry though


~eros
schedule August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hey just decide to read it today. and i like it also i want to make clear will this be a M-preg fic.
person LoversMedium
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that this story is wonderful! I do not know if you are still writing on it, though. I still give it a thumbs up!!