schedule
February 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh wow
I love this story i hope to see more when you can!*S*
I love this story i hope to see more when you can!*S*
schedule
February 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i am enjoying this story and cant wait for the next chapter. please write again soon.
schedule
February 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wish you had warned about the rape. Hopefully Harry's life will get better.
schedule
February 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy the plots and pace so far and its pretty good for being your first. The only thing i have a major problem with is the random author notes in the middle of chapters or and comments you add in (). To me it distracts from your work.
schedule
January 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your story please keep going with it...you have talent with writting.
schedule
November 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this story is awesome!!
im dying to see dumbles get some of his own back!^^
and i really hope that snape is kind with harry about what happened and that draco and he help him with it *sad*
please tell me youre still posting???
i NEED more!
noirekitsune@yahoo.com
im dying to see dumbles get some of his own back!^^
and i really hope that snape is kind with harry about what happened and that draco and he help him with it *sad*
please tell me youre still posting???
i NEED more!
noirekitsune@yahoo.com
schedule
September 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's been a long time since I've read a story on this site, but I stumbled on yours and had to smile. Don't give up writing it if its something you enjoy. If not just for enjoyment, then for escape or relief.. expression of your own life and experiences but in the world of another. I read and love these stories for exactly that, a brief moment of escape from the monotony of work. Real life creeps up and although I rarely review stories, I do read them. Have fun and do it for you.
schedule
August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am a fan of creature stories. However, I just couldn't finish yours. The in text notes were very distracting and by chapter six the cliche and unprofessional notes/comments just made it where I couldn't read anymore. I think if you cleaned up the story and the direction, you would have a very good idea.
schedule
July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and read all 19 chapters!
hope you update!
hope you update!
schedule
July 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! It is one of the best I have read lately and I would hate to see it be abandoned...