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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A Friendly Reminder
Just thought I'd leave you a note to let you know your disclaimer is lacking. According to the Terms of Service you need to include that you are in fact making no money from writing this story, and that you do not own the people involved. Also it helps if you specify the fandom you are writing about.
Even though this story is about fictional characters, it needs to be known that they are not yours and you
Just thought I'd leave you a note to let you know your disclaimer is lacking. According to the Terms of Service you need to include that you are in fact making no money from writing this story, and that you do not own the people involved. Also it helps if you specify the fandom you are writing about.
Even though this story is about fictional characters, it needs to be known that they are not yours and you
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 6!! Why was Hermione and the Grangers getting money and why was Hermione getting that much?
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great couple of chapters... I'm intrigued to read what happens next.
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting. though im not sure how superman fits in. batman yes spiderman ok but superman? i just don't see the connection. maybe just me though
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have a Good Story line but the spelling mistakes ruin it a bit.
I suggest getting a Beta to help check things over before you post.
Also The Harry Potter Lexicon Site, will be able to assist you with spelling of Names and places, even spells without you having to refer back to the books all the time.
Try it.
http://www.hp-lexicon.org/index-2.html
Hope that helps!
I suggest getting a Beta to help check things over before you post.
Also The Harry Potter Lexicon Site, will be able to assist you with spelling of Names and places, even spells without you having to refer back to the books all the time.
Try it.
http://www.hp-lexicon.org/index-2.html
Hope that helps!
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story already. I look forward to the next chapter and pray it's up as soon as possible.
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! This has got to be the richest Harry in fandom. Just a note - you spelled galleons correctly, but it is Arthur not Aurthur.
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty good so far :)
BUT, do yourself a favour and research the words you are uncertain about and don't ask your readers i.e. Quidditch( did I spell that right? probably not.). http://www.harrypotterfanzone.com/?ID=info/dictionary <-- This site is great for that. Another thing, dont write your thoughts/comments IN the story i.e (I made him up so you may dislike him but you may not flame him! Grrr.). It's better if you put in a number, (*) and then write your thoughts/comments at the end of the chapter as an authors note, it gives the story a better flow.
I hope you aren't offended by my review. I got this advice myself when I started writing fanfiction :)
BUT, do yourself a favour and research the words you are uncertain about and don't ask your readers i.e. Quidditch( did I spell that right? probably not.). http://www.harrypotterfanzone.com/?ID=info/dictionary <-- This site is great for that. Another thing, dont write your thoughts/comments IN the story i.e (I made him up so you may dislike him but you may not flame him! Grrr.). It's better if you put in a number, (*) and then write your thoughts/comments at the end of the chapter as an authors note, it gives the story a better flow.
I hope you aren't offended by my review. I got this advice myself when I started writing fanfiction :)
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Short, but sounds like fun.
I am looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
I am looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He owns Hogwarts,so he should have a private room, if not the Founder's rooms.