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Uh oh!!! Not good!!! I soooo need chapter 10!!!

I like this story. Please email me if when you update if you get the chance ^^

good chapter

Sooo need chapter 9! Is Sirius on Harry's side? I sooo hope so!!!

good chapter

I have enjoyed reading this fic, in spite of the author notes in the middle of the paragraph.
If You are still looking for a Beta, I am willing to help you. One of my writer's seems to have abandoned her story which leaves me with some time. Feel Free to email me at slytherdor7@googlemail.com.
If Not, I look forward to your next chapter.

Slyth

YAY! sirius is back! im glad.

you are so entitled to be angry. as for how to get a beta i think you just have to ask someone and then email them your story before you put it up and they make any corrections in spelling or grammar and email it back. anyways i like that there's a witch for harry to be friends with. they will be friends right?

Sounds like a fun group!!! Sooo need chapter 8!!!

Hi I just want to say I love you fic, I am writer as well so I can understand some of the annoyance to some of the reviews. When it comes to betas I think there is a forum the way I found mine was stating i needed one in my fanfic and asking to email me. That aside while your notes within the story are informative they break the flow, when I was reading I would get into the story and then come upon a not and the thrall would be broken. this is only said constructively.If you want to keep them do just wanted to let you know. This is your fic but as writer you are trying to reach an audience and keep them interested I still am so you are doing a good job.