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February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I
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February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
really getting interesting. i would like to see more of draco but hey that's just me. lol. i can't wait to see what happens between harry and ron i kinda hope they stay friends. it's not done enough in fanfiction where hermione betrays but ron stays. well at least not in the harry/draco fics that i've read.
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February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Thanks for emailing me or I would have never remembered.
I loved this chapter. I hope Ron is okay, and I hope Harry realizes Ron isn't bad at all, its all the others that are bad.
Will Ron get a boyfriend? Hopefully Hermione gets caught or something. I am really hating her, and Dumbledore.
Great job! Please update soon, it was so long that you posted last.
I loved this chapter. I hope Ron is okay, and I hope Harry realizes Ron isn't bad at all, its all the others that are bad.
Will Ron get a boyfriend? Hopefully Hermione gets caught or something. I am really hating her, and Dumbledore.
Great job! Please update soon, it was so long that you posted last.
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December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it! love it! please upload more?! i think the author comments add charm to it. you aren't writing for profit, therefore you can do what ever you want with it. i have been waiting for an evil Hermione. will Harry find out about Ron not betraying him. what would Ron do without his girlfriend? very cool familiars for Harry, by the way. i still think Voldemort should be evil though. keep writing!
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December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am loving this story! i would like to read more so update soon. i actually didn't find that many mistakes so i do not find it necessary for you to get a beta. i love how you give Harry a back bone. the tattoo sounds really cool. i think you should go for the nipple ring on Harry, its more sexy. love it lots, update Please!!!!????
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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hm. very interesting. this is a very enjoyable story to read! please make more chapters soon!
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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i also agree with harrydraco4life on both things! please make more chapters soon!( hopefully before christmas if you can!)
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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, first of all CONGRATULATIONS on your first fanfic, I think it's great, the plot has been written may times, but I think you really have made it original, with enough twists to keep surprising me. I also think it is great how you build up the story, instead of rushing things up like other authors do. I really regreat I just started reading it now, cause I didn
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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Maybe Harry, Remus, and Sirius should take a secret trip to Hogwarts. I can imagine Dumbledorks face when he loses control over the wards. They know all the secret ways in. Harry owns Hogwarts. He can go and take control of the school. That way when school starts, the portraits will answer to him and not Dumbles. Dumbles can't use the school, pictures, ghosts, or elves to spy on Harry. Plus, the bonus of the stairs or some of the doors messing with Dumbledore would just be a bonus. Harry could also use these things to make Dumbles look crazy in front of the teachers and students. Anything that screws up Dumbledore's life would just put a smile on Harry, Sirius, and Remus's face. He could even have Sirius and Remus liveing at the school with him and Dumbledork would never know, since owning Hogwarts gives them control of everything.