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by GammaOrionis

person Voracious reader
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really having trouble with a schizophrenic Lucius talking to himself in his head. You write this too well, I think. Can Severus whip up some thorazine for him? Whether it's his bad persona or his good one, Hermione has really got her hands full if she's going to be able to make anything out of this ludicrous marriage he's forced her into. Otherwise, she's going to spend the rest of her life in that Lady's suite at the manor. More, when you are up to it, please!
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm a bit concerned with Lucius's constant conversations with himself. It's almost like schio-affect disorder (he makes too much sense to have a true thought disorder). However, he does seem to have some mental illness. I'm glad to see Hermione calming down, I hope now that lines of communication are opening things will improve for them.

I notice that you commented that you are tired...I don't know what side of the world you are from, but could it be weather related? I know in the winter all I want to do is sleep. My doctor calls it Seasonal Affect Disorder (S.A.D.for short) and some people are quite prone to it. Luckily there is a reasonable treatment...sun lamps. I know you aren't fond of medications (I'm not either but I have bi-polar disorder so I'm stuck lol) but a sun lamp (or tanning bed?) may help with the symtoms. The disorder is thought to be triggered by the lack of light from the shorter days. If you don't have it the treatment won't hurt you a bit. I hope you feel better soon either way.

I'm really enjoying both stories and am already looking forward to the next set of chapters.
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I am glad that Hermione and Lucius are talking. I hope that they can continue to get along and agree to make decisions together and not him making all of the decisions on his own and forcing her to do things. I look forward to reading more soon.
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aaawww! Poor Lucius! I'll hug him!
person Citten
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well i greatly enjoyed the chapter!!!! i will be looking forward to the next chapter! boy draco is the grown up and they are the kids. i cant beleive hermione sometimes she is just as bad if not worse in her own way. poor lucius he makes my heart hurt! the poor man has he ever know love a true love? and i dont mean that love he shares with his son. well the poor man has gone through hell in the last month now he will be able to see her if not tough her now maybe they can start working some things out. :) i will be watch for the next chapter. how are you doing by-the-way? well i hope. :)
person maddie50
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a tough one. Lucius is being so possessive and controlling, but Hermione has gone over the top, too. She is being cruel by not talking this problem out with her obviously emotionally disturbed husband.
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope that Hermione will give Lucius a chance but only after they set some rules, such as, he can't force her to do things that she doesn't want to do. I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Told you so! I only have a favourite out of your two sequels as long as I did not read the other update! I LOVE this chapter, really!

I finally can like the Lucius in this story! He's so sad and hurt! It doesn't make what he did better, but I think I can forgive him by now... *swoons*

They are gonna talk! They are gonna be happy! Having babies... Could I impersonate Hermione? I fit the description: long, curly and unruly (I REFUSE to call it 'bushy') hair, petite, VERY intelligent *winks*... Just a tiny little glamour for my eyes... Do you think Lucius could tell the difference? Please, pretty, pretty please!

OR: Let Draco ditch Astoria... I would take him, too!

Goodness, I really don't know what I should say apart from: I LOVE THIS STORY!
person salazarslytherin14
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE
PLEASE
KEEP GOING I NEED TO KNOW WHATS GONNA HAPPEN
I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE HURRY
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG!!!!!! Poor poor Lucius!!!!! Did you get the bunny's email? If not then it was due to a connection trouble we had. FLyff is recovered and he is proud to say that the next chapter of the Dramione will be out soon!

Please let her be kind to Luscious!