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by GammaOrionis

schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Neat, quick, and efficient, just as two professionals would make it. Now, on with the, er, ... punitive action, shall we call it? That baby had better be all right, or Hell couldn't afford to pay that tab.
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Evil cliffie! you can't do this to me!!!!!

Pansy needs to be smacked back!

Will Lucius come to the rescue? Please make him do it.
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOO - you can't leave us hanging like this....AARRGHH! Who is that voice? Why would they ransom Hermione? Dear goodness "Mr. Malfoy" is probably PISSED! Not going to look good is it? And she's pregnant, when her "men" realize that, all hell is going to break loose. Putting a future Malfoy in danger is not good. I feel sorry for Pansy and her accomplice...NAAAH! Just kidding, I don't. KICK ASS "MR. MALFORY"!
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I hope that Lucius/Mr. Malfoy finds Hermione soon before something happens to her and their baby. I hope that Pansy and the male that she is working with both get exactly what they deserve. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yes! go rescue her Lucius or Mr Malfoy! dont care :D

man, that parkinson :l she'll get what she deserves of that im sure :)

loved it! :D update soon!
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mr. Malfoy does have his uses, doesn't he? I know that if I were in trouble, that's one man I want on my side! (and my front, and my back, and my...oh, yeah, right. Reviewing) Nicely done!
person danylee
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
uh oh! i think mr.malfoy is about to whip somebody's ass! *squee* i love badass lucius! he's hot! i hope nothing too terrible happens to hermione in the meantime. i HATE pansy. i can't believe draco ever dated that hag. i hope she gets what is coming to her. please update soon! i am dying to read the next chapter.
person jaimelee
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear... Mr.Malfoy's come out to play. Please update soon. I can't wait to see what he does to Pansy!
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh... Quick, review before once again you update this story without getting feedback from me! Uh, I am so terribly sorry but until 5 minutes ago I still did not have a working internet connection at home. But now (I swear, the technician from the telephone hotline had a NICE voice) it works (wasn't my fault at ALL - NO, I entered the key CORRECTLY - *blushes*)!

So our little Hermione is pregnant? Thought she wanted to wait for some time? Quite the change of heart if I may say so! Guess she's falling for both of her husbands?

And what about that thing of getting rid of Mr. Malfoy? Hummm... Not sure I like that idea. I think I would prefere a mixture of Lucius and Mr. Malfoy actually. I mean honestly, Lucius is just a little too insecure and boyish, whilste Mr. Malfoy behaves like an ass most of the time. So hum... What do you think about a self confident, sometimes dominant, but still caring and loving guy? Maybe we could call him Mr. Lucius since Draco's name is already "Malfoy" *kidding*.

Waiting for the next update (and hoping that you will get this review before you post the next chapter since I saw you updated Only Time)!
person andarte
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think as the stories progress I'm favoring Only Time more, but I still love reading the latest chapters of this. Hope you're feeling well!