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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh! PLEASE!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!! SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, the wedding is done! Sniffs. So sweet...very posh Malfoy-grade attire! Love that...so next is the wedding 'night' oh poor little Hermione.... is she excited otr scared or both? What will Lucius do to her? PPlaes let him be gentle...
My veela plotbunny is nervous...he sent you a few carrots with my email)plot bunnies can do that) and was devastated when he didnt get a reply...he now thinks he's poioned you and that you don't want to write to us. *strokes bunnny*
My veela plotbunny is nervous...he sent you a few carrots with my email)plot bunnies can do that) and was devastated when he didnt get a reply...he now thinks he's poioned you and that you don't want to write to us. *strokes bunnny*
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a lovely chapter! I absolutely adore the way you describe the wedding. Or shall I better say bounding? I always imagined that a magical wedding should be different from a normal muggle wedding, even if JKR described Bills' and Fleurs' like a rather ordinary one.
Also, to come back to the blood stained sheets - I figured that was your intention. It is actually a bit confusing that you think so much like me. Because those exact blood stained sheets have been floating through my head for quiet some time. Well, I guess it might not be THAT extraordinary after all, but still not something that is described often in fanfiction.
Ron is not so wrong when calling Lucius Mr. Mental, is he now? You definitly make him seem slightly deranged in this chapter (and the last one, too). I guess you will resolve the riddle why that is at one point or the other, right? Because in my eyes that is much more than just having waited for so long!
By the way, I don't see Lucius letting Hermione work, do you? I guess not... Hum, wizarding society IS quiet archaic. Love it. In Germany till the 1950s husbands were allowed to quit a job on behalf of their wives and the wife couldn't have a bank account on her own without his permission. Reminds me a little bit of that.. ;-)
Oh, and I don't think she will be to happy when the spell finally stops influencing her? Even if she really wants/needs to be with him right now, she will certainly severly put out when it ceases working! Especially since Lucius did already coax those modified vows out of her! I wonder why she gave in so easily? Hmm... There might be a little subconcient wish there to bind herself to the boy she once new?
God work!
Also, to come back to the blood stained sheets - I figured that was your intention. It is actually a bit confusing that you think so much like me. Because those exact blood stained sheets have been floating through my head for quiet some time. Well, I guess it might not be THAT extraordinary after all, but still not something that is described often in fanfiction.
Ron is not so wrong when calling Lucius Mr. Mental, is he now? You definitly make him seem slightly deranged in this chapter (and the last one, too). I guess you will resolve the riddle why that is at one point or the other, right? Because in my eyes that is much more than just having waited for so long!
By the way, I don't see Lucius letting Hermione work, do you? I guess not... Hum, wizarding society IS quiet archaic. Love it. In Germany till the 1950s husbands were allowed to quit a job on behalf of their wives and the wife couldn't have a bank account on her own without his permission. Reminds me a little bit of that.. ;-)
Oh, and I don't think she will be to happy when the spell finally stops influencing her? Even if she really wants/needs to be with him right now, she will certainly severly put out when it ceases working! Especially since Lucius did already coax those modified vows out of her! I wonder why she gave in so easily? Hmm... There might be a little subconcient wish there to bind herself to the boy she once new?
God work!
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"...and the crowd went wild....WWWWOOOOOOOOO..(Loud claps and cheers)" OMG i loved it, please add more soon!!!! Really soon!
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The wedding clothes sound stunning. Ginny's part of the ceremony was a little curt. Ha ha. The bonding kiss was becoming a risque. I will be curious to see what happens next.
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter.
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I hope against hope that it wasn't just the binding that made hermione passionate. At least for their first time together as man and wife it should be conscious lust and desire. Maybe have lucius show a little (or a lot *hopeful grin*) of his 'former' self so hermione can get over his domineering ways of the last few weeks ... if only for this moment.
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sigh....if only Lucius could be rational...... Yeah, right. lol Great update!
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Please update soon.
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was very worth the wait! i loved the ceremony and the rings. i liked the bridge too! :) hopfully they can work on building other bridges too. so now the really fun part, the after part, do take your time to make everything in this part! :) i will be watching for this part!