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yeah a new chap!!!! ok so bella and fenrir interesting combo so i am guessing the answer to my earlier question about bella is that she is on the side of the bad but what else could we really expect from her... i am glad she in this chap i do enjoy the way you write her... ok so who is this informant on the inside??? Draco?? i hope not he would be going against his daughter, of course i am not sure that he knows about her little membership... could it be severus??? hmm i am not sure on that either, i am actually thinking that this insider for the remaining death eaters has not been read about yet??? but i am not sure... ok so james is packing for hogwarts, ohh i hope the students like him as well but i am sure that they will of course there will be the ones that will be against him but i think he will overcome that, at least i hope... and harry sent him a howler, hmm i am still interested in learning more on their relationship... oh lmao tobias with pink hair omg thats good.. i can just imagine the scowl on his face... great job

Yay! Another chapter. For the record, i think Snape Sr. is the "Master". He could also be the half-ling or that could be James (i can't decide yet).
Please update again soon. Oh, and kill ron painfully please.

Oh I'm so freaking flatter!!! I'm jumping on my seat haha my friends here at college think I lost my last screw LOL but this chapter was awesome, like James *hugs* was so cute he almost made me cry *Don't cwy my little dwagon* and it's about fucking time you snapped out of it woman, I mean Hermione Granger being subjected to that fucking overgrown veggie was just about to get on my last good neuron. Draco and Draca well thank you and to the others like my lost love *you broke my heart Seviee* you can be so dense sometimes but I sure it won't happen again *like everything with you*, the Master well I won't dwell on him just yet. Great chapter, update soon and take lots of care.

Love to all
Lola

Oh good, I'm glad Phelan is ok!
I love how Draco got so emotional over Hermione's story, and especially James. Tell our James-y that he just has to be strong for 'Mione, its ok that he didn't see it before, he's helping her NOW. :D
Great chapter. Thanks for the update!

woo hoo... first of all let me say thank you for allowing me to guess no matter how far away i am from what is really going on, i still love trying to guess... ok so heavy chap here... wow an outburst from draco. hmm and of course he would hate that hermione was abused bc he saw it in his own father.... snape is funny i do like him so much... and wow she really opened up to draca but that is good she has been holding it in for way to long... and woo hoo we got a little teaser of the master, i am still no where near knowing who it is but you did give us some hints... it is someone who knows about what is happening to hermione and what ron is doing to her it is also someone who knows enough about each member of the group to know their past and their parents past... also it is someone who has lived a life of lies and secrets hmm.... ok great chap i can not wait to read whats going to happen next... great job....

oh my... A wonderful story i would say..

But I have a feeling that this will take a long time to finish...

I just can't wait to get my hands on your next chappie.... ^^

YAY - Draco has made an appearance...LOL.

i'm happy to see Draco as a caring father and nothing at all like Lucius was when he was young. Draca seems to be a very spirited young woman, kind of like Hermione in her younger days.

James is very much like the father who has seemingly turned his back on him.....a man who fights for whats right and defends others. Will Harry ever open his eyes?

Now we have an appearance by the "Master" - I look forward to seeing what this Master is possibly planning and who this Master is!

Wonderful update!

Lady B*

I AM BACK! And ready to review. I promise no abandoning, just a major ass kicking handed to me by life.
It's been an emotional and hard few weeks. So I've been pretty low and exceptionally busy and tired.
I had read chapter 8 but didnt have time to review, so I came back tonight to do so, and what do you know there's a whole new chapter. YEAAAHHH!

So...here we go...
Chapter 8:
I love that you take your readers suggestions to heart, I just hope you do it because you like what's being said and it really works for you, and not because you're hoping to please us. That being said, I really wasn't sure about it. I know I know right? I suggested it. But I seemed to see it in print, and was like....WHY DID I SUGGEST THAT!? lmao. It just felt....while it was a good transition into Chapter 9(not until you wrote chapter 9 did I think this of course)....it was lacking something. I thought maybe everything should have come out in that chapter....but then of course I read chapter 9 and was like...nope it works in a drawn out way.
So I really hope you take peoples suggestions fully based on what you like for your story and not for a "This is to please my readers". If thats the case....I really hope you write from the heart from now on. If its not the case, well then I'm glad you like suggestions.
Am I rambling at all? I feel as if I am.

Chapter 9:
*sigh* Poor Hermione. She's just not Hermione. It's so sad to see her spirit broken like that.
I love Snape...he's such an open snarky character. I must admit...I would really love to see some hidden emotions of Snape fly through this story, especially regarding Hermione. He always belittled her in the books, but I had this sneaking suspicion that it's because he knew he could push her into excellence and not b/c he hated her. I always thought he held a secret soft spot for her intelligence. I like the emotion you did show for him about Ronald though. I like getting into his thoughts, and I love the way you do.
Oh James...I just want to hug him. Nothing is ever easy for the Potters is it? lol
And this Master seems strikingly familiar....do we know him or is he a figment of your imagination come alive on the computer screen?

Keep up the good work missy. The further along this story gets, the more intrigued I am to solve the questions I have.
I plan to have the second chapter of my rewrite up tonight. I'm in a literary mood. So if I do, I hope you'll read and rate and review. I'd love to hear all your feedback and any suggestions or questions you my have.
'Till next time.
dM

Oh, LOVE the udpate! Thanks!!
I'm soo glad that Draco allowed Draca to go to Hermione. I'm really hoping that she'll be able to help Mione. How is our dear Phelan doing? And I can't wait to see how Fenrir takes care of Ron, the stupid bastard!

Tell Draco I'll be waiting *wink* Haha!

alright now we are getting somewhere with this hermione/ron drama...i am excited to see what actually happened and how this all started... ok so i was off on the ginny thing but i did not really mean that ginny was a bad mother just that she has a full plate... ok so draco has a toy poodle interesting... it is good to see that he has not changed much... i am interested in hearing how the mens conversations go as well it should be interesting!!!