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wow you definitely tied up some loose strings... ok so way to go hermione.. telling harry that his best friend was horrible to her had to be hard it kind of busts that image he has of him... i am glad that harry tried to say thank you to james but you are right this is really deep...you can tell that the tension between them is thick... oooohhhh how sweet is draco he really is trying isn't he... so now we know what happened to his wife and i see a connection forming with them i was wondering what would break the ice for them... and phelan and romolus (sorry if i misspelled that) getting their bellies rubbed by hagrid... HA HA LMAO OMG first tobias with the pink hair and now these two getting their bellies rubbed... omg thats rich... i love it!!!! ok so great job i am looking forward to the shit hitting the fan... :-)

Hey there!!

I'm glad I made you laugh! I'm also glad you didn't pee your pants. I would have felt bad for putting you in such an uncomfortable state. hahaha

So on to the review shall we?
I really liked the funeral part of this chapter. You could feel she was mixed up on hoe she should feel. Which just makes it all the more interesting.

Draco seems to have really changed, which is intriguing. I'd really like to see this character come to fruition. I just hope he isn't too soft. He is still a Slytherin after all, not a Hufflepuff. lol

I felt like the last two bits were fillers. Which is always disappointing, only because the more drama the better(unless its real life in which case it can stay the eff away from me).
I liked the filler though. I mean the James/Harry moment did say something, just not a heck of a whole lot. or nothing we didn't already know.
Now that the funeral is done, I'm interested what will happen next. I mean not TOO much has been said about this little group. So I can't wait for that to spill out some more.
Same with the whole Hermione/Draco thing.
Can't Wait. Good Chapter.

dM

oh p.s. Thank you very very very much! I love yours as well, but I know you knew that already!!!

Sorry for reviewing so late...I love it! like it was awesome, Thank you my fangy overly shaggy ummm...friend? well James my darling I just...I'm lost of words, you and Tobias just got me speechless. Harry please don't be thickheaded I love you all but the overgrown -now rotting in a place near you- veggie, update soon, take care.

Love
Lola

Oh my.

So it was a slow start, a little filler in the beginning that was heartwarmingly fantastic. :) And then boy oh boy did it pick up.

So you killed off Ron eh? I knew it was bound to happen. I had a small feeling he was going to go on the long journey. I didn't expect so soon though I must say. I was definitely caught off guard.
I found it a very fitting end to him though. And even though gore isn't my thing, you always write it so I can read it without cringing. Which always makes me admire your talents more :)
I'm excited to see what you're going to pull out next, so much has happened in such little time, I can't imagine flinging anything else Hermione and Jame's way. Will you let it die down for just a bit...or will it all blow up before she can mend the pieces back together?

oh I'm dying a little inside laughing at your ending comment to your review response.

a little gore never killed anyone.
Oh but it did, didn't it?
Did you realize how ironic of a statement that was? hehehehe oh yes I laugh at weird things I'm well aware ahha.
I meant to review this last night after I posted my chapter. But then I got distracted by a video game my fiance was playing and forgot entirely about anything I was doing previously. I woke up this morning to find my review page open to your story. hahaha

I would have enjoyed my Holiday...if we had Thanksgiving then. lol I live in Canada, our Thanksgiving was in early October. But I did enjoy it immensely then!
I hope you enjoyed yours. and ate lots of turkey. gobble gobble. ;) (I know I know....laaaammmme)

I eagerly await the trauma's bound to come next! I hope you update soon!!!
dM

YEAAAHHHH oh wow great chap!!!! poor hermione it must be hard to be a shell of your former self, to allow someone who is supposed to love you beat you down and take away your freedom and who you are.... it had to be tough for her at hogwarts to realize that she would have to struggle so hard from rock bottom... i love severus and i like how he is able to tone down his snark!!! and how sweet of james he really is a good guy and sooo sweet... i just love the connection between him and hermione... and his friends are helping that is just to sweet... OMG ron ron ron well you just got your ass handed to you by greyback... greyback definitely got revenge for what happened to his son... and hermione got to see it all, soooo now to the important part, a boon from greyback this could be REALLY helpful for hermione but i am not sooo sure that bella will find this to be a good, ok so she is going to tell harry this should be good... i wonder how he will take it or even if he will believe her??? ok so i have another thought on why there may be a wedge between harry and james... well james was obviously a slytherin and harry despised slytherins... you know all the witches and wizards in slytherin turn bad or whatever... well that would have affected harry to have his son in that house esp since he fought so hard against the sorting hat when it wanted to place him there... i know this is minor but i think that it could have helped harry make some of his opinions when it comes to james...

Could have lived without the gore, though I do thank you for the warning. Great chapter, thanks for the update! :D

Oh my baby!! you are so awesome I love you, now on the story: that's it go on Greyback Kill the bastard ( I still Hate you mutt) but I hate him more and Bella well I don't care what you do really, but if you dare to even think about my dragon I will rip you apart limb by limb, are we clear? Good, now go on an kill the veggie, I loved the chapter as always, so update soon and take care

Love
Lola

Aww, James'll be a wonderful teacher!! He's nothing to worry about. I''m sure of it.
:D
Great chapter! Can't wait for more!

Hey there!
Abandon your story my love? I could never do that! Even if I wasn't sure or didn't think I liked it, I would simply put up the effort b/c I like you as a writer and as such would put my valuable time in your hands in the hope that you story had potential. Luckily thats not the case and I'm thoroughly enthralled with this story.

I must say that your writing improves as the chapters go on. I am very very impressed. Although I loved your previous story I must admit it was very childish to some aspects when it came to the characters emotions. Minus Ruby's capture and torture scenes(DONT GET ME WRONG. I LOVED IT AND STILL WILL LOVE IT. And it worked with and for your characters given their age in that story) Anyways, I just am very happy to see when a new chapter posts its even better and more expressive and intriguing than the next.

Anyways, I'm glad you are independent. I was pretty positive you were, but I had to check. I would hate to think such a talented writer is influenced not from people for ideas, but by people b/c of their ideas.

I wished it were a bit longer, but since I am guilty of short chapters as well I really shouldn't complain should I? It'd be very hypocritical and uncouth of me.

haha till next time my dear, where I can learn more about Bella and Fenrir, and their plot to take over Hogwarts
With Love and a Smile,
dM

Hello
I'm a long time reader but this is my first review. I like the story and I hope you will finish it. I hate when I really get in to a story and then it stops and author doesn't finish it. I like your new people. I know who their fathers are but who are their mothers, and where are they now? Keep up the good work.