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ok that definitely was not a coincidence but who knew that he would be there i mean he is not a professor and has no reason to be there then why was he left in the forest like that who found him???? it has to be someone that was there at the school but why would they be there and how did they know about the meeting... anyway great chap

Awwwww.

I don't like people. Always so judgemental. I know this is just fan fic....but I totally still think it about the human race and I always find it so interesting when people write it into their stories. It feeds of the real, the way other emotions do in fanfic.

I really loved this chapter. I really love seeing James' loyality. It's intense, and I like that. No one besides the Unseen and Hermione see it for that and its sad.

I hope that some day in this fic the bigotry will stop.

I'm excited to see what will happen next. I have theories on who it could of possibly been. I don't think it was Bellatrix or Fenrir...even though thats the kind of maliciousness you'd expect from them.
It's just, Dolohov Sr. was their ally...one of them. Fought for the same things, wanted the same things, believed in the same Dark just as vehemently as they did(unless you've changed that in this fic in which case my theory is blown out of the water)
I also don't think it was just a random attack.
Bigotry lies deep within this story and I have a hunch that it lies deep within the mystery of Aden's attack.

Should be interesting to find out though.
There's a lot going on with this story, but I just know everything ties into the Unseen. I mean Ron tied Hermione into it when he attacked Phelan. Draco is tied into because of Draca, and will be because of Hermione. Harry will be tied into it because of James and Hermione and the fact that he's an auror. And so on and so forth. Every thing I'm starting to realize, will crucially boil down to what goes on between the Unseen and the Dark.
Interesting.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
dM

Ahhh, Ok so I had few chapters to catch up on.....

Ron's dead at the hand of Greyback, and promises Hermione one favor. Thats interesting, I wonder what that favor will be one day.

Hermione is at Hogwarts, Draco has reached out to her after Ron dies. So I assume that this is the start of their more frequent interactions.....Can't wait to see where this story takes them.

I love your Snape....trying to be less abrasive so as not to hurt Hermione any more than she already is =)

Harry tried to have a decent conversation with James but that didn't work out so well. I hope he learns how to talk to his son. NO matter how old James may be he still needs his father around.

Aden is hurt?? What happened?? And damn those Aurors!!!! Treating him like so much garbage!! Glad at least one of them let him leave peacefully, even though it was only because Harry Potter is his father.

Brilliant work, DragonFyre.....Looking forward to more!!! =)

Lady B*
xoxoxo

So, I'm a loser and I didn't review the last chapter... I didn't mean to not review it... but man, finals are a -itch.
As usual, super work. :D

Hmm... I can't see where this story is going... But I like the direction of it.. Lol..

I do so hope that James will have his own hoard of fans real soon.. I mean REAL fans that like him... hahaha ^^

Keep 'em coming...

Soooooooo the veggie is dead That's good indeed, poor Phelan (fucking beast of a father), and Draco oh so cute after all he does have a heart, Harry well he just have to watch his tongue around my dragon ( I love you sweetheart) and thanks Harry for the support you gave Hermione ahhhh I got so much to say, so little words and I'm very intrigued as of was is going to happen, The song got me a little bit more intrigued than before, and well as you may know now I love the story, the storyline and You too...take lots of care....update soon.

All My Love
Lola

Aww, stupid kids. I demand that they love James as much as I do! You tell him that if it doesn't work out with Draca, I'll be more than happy to step into her place. I love you James!(and I love the fact that you have dragon features, it makes you even hotter to me-screw the rest of the widarding world, they don't know what they're missing out on)
I'm glad that everything's resolved with Hermione and now she and Draco can get together. Please don't keep us in suspense, I need to know what happens next. Update soon please!

wooo hooo... another update... ok so this was a great chap... you did really well with the sorting hat song... and you are right that hat generally is spot on when it sings... so james did not get to much of a warm welcome but that is ok i am sure he will do well in class... so draca was a slytherin that is interesting.... i am looking forward to the next chap to see what everyone else in the unseen thinks of the sorting hats song...

Phew that was a lot to take in.

Did you write that sorting song? I am thoroughly impressed!! Not many can make a very believable or at all good sorting song, but you my dear pulled it off wonderfully!!!!

So...interesting...we know Bella and Fenrir are planning something against Hogwarts...that much is clear.
And we know the Unseen has been commissioned so to speak, to guard against any evils.
When it comes down to it, and the full out battle I have a feeling will ensue, I wonder how Fenrir will feel about Phelan defending good, instead of being so overtly evil.
I really adore Phelan. I know he's sort of a minor character. But I just adore him. I hope he becomes a little ore finite into this world. <3(I have a crush! lol)

I liked Hermione and Draco's reactions to their entrances. Very cute.
Great self esteem booster for her. She'll need it.
I was really excited to see this posted up so soon! Definitely made my morning :)

Can't wait for more.
dM

Phew! Just finished reading the whole thing, very intriguing. I like the individuality of this story. I also particularly like James's physical appearance. I had an idea for writing a story that would have portrayed a similar character but as a female. Sadly I never got down to it, so you're nicely original! I'd like to see more interaction between Draco and Hermione, but I can see you've set it up nicely already and I'm sure we won't be disappointed!
I was also wondering if there will be any love-interest for James? I could see him and Draca together, though there's been very little interplay between them. If not those two, is there any one else??
The abusive Ron was a bit shocking at first, but you made it fit quite nicely. Hermione's character was also well done as it fit the abused victim very very well. Though I was surprised at how easily she opened up to Draca who is obviously her junior. Though the scene flowed, I'm not sure I felt comfortable with it. Perhaps I'm just not seeing how Hermione was desperate for female companionship and longed to open up to someone.
Anywhooo, well done, please update soon!
xx