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Yummy pic...you should do images of all The Unseen along with older Draco/Hermione. SO:
- Bella's son is a student and informant, question: have we met him yet? Is there a clue? Sounds like he's a 6th year.
- Is Draco a widow? And "Friends" RIIIIGHHT - I say that lasts 2 chapters MAX LOL!
- Will Draco/Hermione play a bigger role? Does their coming together impact this story?
- Is the Dark Lord REALLY gone?
- I want Fenrir to get his comupence already - preferably from his son, who kicks his butt and takes over as Alpha-male wolf
- I feel like The Unseen are getting their butts kicked, I hope they're stronger
- Any romance planned for any of our wonderful heroes?

LOVE THIS STORY - do you have an LiveJournal?

Ha? I don't know...Bellatrix/Fenrir isn't my fav pairing, damn it...but now we know they have pup together?! Hahaha. Anyway, I still don't get what she wanted from her plan (since I don't know what's her plan) but I'm sure if I think again I would go crazy as her too!

I'm glad to read some of DM/HG in this chap. It's kinda big step for them, right? I'm beginning to like James more and more in this story.

Also, I like that you update very often, which is very fine for me..I check new update here almost everyday. Keep writing!

omg ok so love the beginning with hermione and draco i am glad that they can put the past behind them and be friends... ok so bella did this to aden well i am not surprised she is pretty twisted and her accomplice is young.... has to be her son and of course the ending when he said yes mother is a clue as well.... wow i really am interested in seeing what happens next and i am glad that you trough hermione and draco in there i like seeing where they are at... and a little history on how severus survived very cool.... great job as always and cool hint

yeah the first day of school... way to go james of course he is popular already.... and i liked tobias in this chap a lot bc he was very much his father with his own personality thrown in we got the usual speech on potions with flare and draca knows how to handle herself thats good i wonder how draco and hermione are doing i wonder who the insider is hmmm could we have a hint???? pretty please... :-) ok so i am looking forward to the next chap and hearing more of what happened to aden(sorry i do not think i spelled that right) ok great job

LMAO - "Dragon-man" I loved your take ont eh Spiderman theme! Wonderful!!!

Well James is well on his way to being a student favorite, but poor Phelan is not. I hope to see people become a bit more accepting as the story goes on. Even though i am sure things will get worse before they get better.

Draca has much of the male Hogwarts population feigning sickness aleady? I don't know any man who wouldn't want a pretty wpman taking care of them.....

Bellatrix and Greyback......and he "smells like a fucking wet dog" Ha ha ha......You had me laughing out loud a few times in this chapter!!!

Can't wait to see whats next!!! Great Update!

Lady B*

I bashing my head trying to figure out who the spy is....there are clues I'm sure...ARGH

hahaha...I really like that Dragon-man song! Very hilarious and I laughed so hard!

and thank God! You didn't detail more about Greyback & Bellatrix's scene! I would be shuddering too!

I don't have more comment on this chapter except..it's quiet entertaining..(Dragon-man, yes!) and it's kinda fill out chapter for the first day of them. Anyway, I like it...(dragon-man again! LOL)

can't wait for next chapter..I'm beginning to forget this is supposed to be DM/HG!

Oh wow..so what I was thinking was well on the mark eh? Huh...makes me feel good that does.

I feel so bad for Phelan. Why are you picking on him? Why does everyone else get to be popular and not him? I'm pouting for him right now.
It's fine. I'll be his friend. I wouldn't judge. Stupid students.

Well I'm glad at least everyone else is settling in and becoming well acquainted with positive attention.
Do we get to hear about Hermione and Draco's first days?
OH I forgot to ask...what does Draco teach, did you tell me? I completely forget if you mentioned it.

I want to know if Hermione got any male attention the way Draca did.

Waiting for explanations(patiently this time lol) and more information to gather.
Till Next Time.
dM

Oooh poor Aden! I hope he's going to be ok!
And those damn aurors! James was just trying to help his friend, and if they hadn't been such a-holes at st. mungos, none of it would have happend!! Weiners. More, soon, please!

The Master is Lucius - I'm certain of it.