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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
more please!!!!
ok that was sad, poor girl, she is so cute is not her fault that HIM! attacked her, she was just curious, and I'm glad to have catched the quote come on Pinky and The Brain were geniouses without a foolproof plan I loved them until elvira came into the picture (curse you Steven Speelberg, I really don't know the spelling of his surname) and well my little heart broke with the poor girl, thank you Sevvie for being the bastard you are!!! and well James I love you, such a little bastard....ta ta for now
take care
update soon
Love
Lola
ok that was sad, poor girl, she is so cute is not her fault that HIM! attacked her, she was just curious, and I'm glad to have catched the quote come on Pinky and The Brain were geniouses without a foolproof plan I loved them until elvira came into the picture (curse you Steven Speelberg, I really don't know the spelling of his surname) and well my little heart broke with the poor girl, thank you Sevvie for being the bastard you are!!! and well James I love you, such a little bastard....ta ta for now
take care
update soon
Love
Lola
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow we definitely got some opinions in this chap.... a lot of them... ok first i am not sure what to think about bellatrix and fenrir so i will leave it at this.... interesting??? I do love severus and i am so glad that he is headmaster bc almost anyone else would have crumpled already under the stress... oh wow that poor girl she has no one... i wonder what will happen to her??? i am glad that severus is not going to fire phelan and romolus... and sweet of draco to want to try and help werewolf charities... i do love james as well.... he is slightly funny and i like his relationship with his friends they really are an interesting group..... ok i just want to say that i am soooo sorry that you are getting sick i had bronchitis about 3 weeks ago so i understand... get feeling better and i hope that you are able to update soon...
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Um, okay - so Rhea's parents completely disowned her, I'm not sure what I was expecting but that wasn't it. This was a very brief chapter - almost like window panes allowing the reader a glance at the repercussions of this young girl's actions. Oh, very clever putting "Rhea" in Gryffindor (hence the lion reference). She reminds me a bit of Hermione: curious, brave, emotional, strong no doubt.
I don't think this will ruin their plan necessarily, just add a new dimension. Think the wolf-boys will have to remember she's a student should she go into heat and when she changes. Can't let the more beastial side take over now can they? Or maybe they can.
Draco's chapter was strange - caught me off guard. I know there's a reason his POV was given but I don't see it yet. Was it just to show how much he has changed by his reaction and the fact that he's considering Lycan charities (ok just the fact that he gives to charity is an eye-opener).
Am loving Snape - he's just badass. He does what he wants but does it well. Perhaps Hermione should meet Rhea and take her under her wing? Two betrayed souls.
James is a sexy bitch - though I love Draco! mm mm good.
I don't think this will ruin their plan necessarily, just add a new dimension. Think the wolf-boys will have to remember she's a student should she go into heat and when she changes. Can't let the more beastial side take over now can they? Or maybe they can.
Draco's chapter was strange - caught me off guard. I know there's a reason his POV was given but I don't see it yet. Was it just to show how much he has changed by his reaction and the fact that he's considering Lycan charities (ok just the fact that he gives to charity is an eye-opener).
Am loving Snape - he's just badass. He does what he wants but does it well. Perhaps Hermione should meet Rhea and take her under her wing? Two betrayed souls.
James is a sexy bitch - though I love Draco! mm mm good.
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January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is that girl mental???!!!! Yes, its a great idea to follow two werewolves into a forbidden zone. Stupid female! Does she realize just how much trouble she was in? Or what danger she put her two proffessors in? Well, at least she's gotten her punishment, but if this effects those poor boys negatively, then I'm gonna have to come in and kick her butt.
Oh, and please update soon, I have to know what happens next.
Oh, and please update soon, I have to know what happens next.
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December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Oh Oh!! MORE!!!!
I love it!!
AWW Phelan I love you and You too Romulus It was awesome you kicked HIS butt (you know he might be like beetlejuice, I don't wanna risk it)
and Rhea is a werewolf now, that's more awesome, a girl in the pack, I mean I'm sorry the poor girl had to go and get bitten like that but they have a girl in the pack :) oh and quoting Pinky and the Brain was just freaking genius LOL
Well Sevvie we need to get you into a Anger Management Club it will help you tons (Now I will run along before he sends a hex on me)
Take care
Update soon
(Love YOU James!)
Lots of love
Lola
I love it!!
AWW Phelan I love you and You too Romulus It was awesome you kicked HIS butt (you know he might be like beetlejuice, I don't wanna risk it)
and Rhea is a werewolf now, that's more awesome, a girl in the pack, I mean I'm sorry the poor girl had to go and get bitten like that but they have a girl in the pack :) oh and quoting Pinky and the Brain was just freaking genius LOL
Well Sevvie we need to get you into a Anger Management Club it will help you tons (Now I will run along before he sends a hex on me)
Take care
Update soon
(Love YOU James!)
Lots of love
Lola
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December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was a stupid move. Love how you introduce these new characters randomly, though I'm sure purposefully. Hmm, a female werewolf - hope our boys don't fight. I guess once you don't fight the wolf, you have more control, it makes sense.
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December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry I disappeared for awhile.
it's been a horrible couple of weeks.
I seriously injured myself just in time for Christmas, and then I was home visiting family and got caught up in that and well yes. I'm sure you know how it goes.
ANYWAYSSS... lol
quite the few produtive chapters you've gotten up. exciting exciting.
How very interesting, Bellatrix has a son? huh...why is his last name not lestrange and why has no one noticed? Thats a mystery I wouldnt mind solving lol.
And Aden. poor guy. Just dreadful *heart*
and what this with the Rhea girl? Will she be a big key in this story or was she just some odd filler to show the fight between Fenrir and Phelan?
What will happen with that?
all sorts of mysteries to solve huh? How long will the wait for the answers be I wonder.
Good Luck with this thing your going too! I hope you get whatever it is you wanted from it. And be safe!!!
till next time as always.
dM
it's been a horrible couple of weeks.
I seriously injured myself just in time for Christmas, and then I was home visiting family and got caught up in that and well yes. I'm sure you know how it goes.
ANYWAYSSS... lol
quite the few produtive chapters you've gotten up. exciting exciting.
How very interesting, Bellatrix has a son? huh...why is his last name not lestrange and why has no one noticed? Thats a mystery I wouldnt mind solving lol.
And Aden. poor guy. Just dreadful *heart*
and what this with the Rhea girl? Will she be a big key in this story or was she just some odd filler to show the fight between Fenrir and Phelan?
What will happen with that?
all sorts of mysteries to solve huh? How long will the wait for the answers be I wonder.
Good Luck with this thing your going too! I hope you get whatever it is you wanted from it. And be safe!!!
till next time as always.
dM
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December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chap i am sorry that your muse went on a vacation those things are tricky.... i am glad that you are back though... i REALLY liked this chap... very good job i enjoyed reading about phelan and rome and this was very exciting to read about them going against fenrir...
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh My!! Sorry for the delay, my finals were choking the living out of me, well my review to the last 3 chapters.
I was shocked into complete silence with the Aden's incident, like that's was just morbid, and poor bastard is not his fault his father was such of scum, why are they so prejudice, that makes them no different from the Oldy Rotting Voldy, James you are definitely the man of my dreams, and so much more for standing up for your friends.
Aww!! the next chapter was just AWESOME!, Dragon-man just fucking hilarious, and then the classes Tobias please never change you are the perfected version of Severus, Phelan well you have a tough luck my friend, we readers know you are nothing like HIM (I'm a little afraid he's like beetlejuice say his name 3 time he shall appear and tear you apart), Draca you are very loving, so cute, then there's HIM and Bella, that's what you get when you assosiate with fleabags like HIM, and well you are a fucking bitch here so you deserve every piece of it.
And last but not least, you should just KISS al-bloody-ready, like come on we know you have had the hots for each other since hormones and puberty started to kick, glad you are friends now, moving on, James you are a hot, cute, awsome, did I said hot Slytherin Potter and I can't be more in love with you...oh wait I can, well you are brave and bellisimo and....okay sidetracking here, now we know who attacked Aden and well James sort of apologize and WHO THE HELL IS BELLATRIX SPAWN??!!
Oh love the part that you kept the melting of the piece of crap formerly know as Voldemort and well that my prince, Severus (don't get hasty my lovely dragon-man, he's in the past) survived obviously and kind of help save the day and the world so to speak.
You know how much I love the story and well Update soon, take lots of care and HAPPY HOLIDAYS!!!
Misbehave
Snog and get some loving under the mistletoe
Love
Lola
I was shocked into complete silence with the Aden's incident, like that's was just morbid, and poor bastard is not his fault his father was such of scum, why are they so prejudice, that makes them no different from the Oldy Rotting Voldy, James you are definitely the man of my dreams, and so much more for standing up for your friends.
Aww!! the next chapter was just AWESOME!, Dragon-man just fucking hilarious, and then the classes Tobias please never change you are the perfected version of Severus, Phelan well you have a tough luck my friend, we readers know you are nothing like HIM (I'm a little afraid he's like beetlejuice say his name 3 time he shall appear and tear you apart), Draca you are very loving, so cute, then there's HIM and Bella, that's what you get when you assosiate with fleabags like HIM, and well you are a fucking bitch here so you deserve every piece of it.
And last but not least, you should just KISS al-bloody-ready, like come on we know you have had the hots for each other since hormones and puberty started to kick, glad you are friends now, moving on, James you are a hot, cute, awsome, did I said hot Slytherin Potter and I can't be more in love with you...oh wait I can, well you are brave and bellisimo and....okay sidetracking here, now we know who attacked Aden and well James sort of apologize and WHO THE HELL IS BELLATRIX SPAWN??!!
Oh love the part that you kept the melting of the piece of crap formerly know as Voldemort and well that my prince, Severus (don't get hasty my lovely dragon-man, he's in the past) survived obviously and kind of help save the day and the world so to speak.
You know how much I love the story and well Update soon, take lots of care and HAPPY HOLIDAYS!!!
Misbehave
Snog and get some loving under the mistletoe
Love
Lola
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy ever-loving s%^&. Who would be stupid enough to impregnate Bellatrix Lestrange? ...Scratch that, I'm not sure I want to know.
Aww, Draco and Hermione were so cute! I adore those two! And I'm so proud of the little first years, loving James as much as I do. I feel bad for Phelan though, I mean, I know there had to be a scapegoat, but still...
Poor Aden. Jerk, b%^#$. She better not try anything like that with James or I'm gonna have to open up a can of whoop-@$$.
Please update as soon as you can. I'm anxious to know what happens next.
Aww, Draco and Hermione were so cute! I adore those two! And I'm so proud of the little first years, loving James as much as I do. I feel bad for Phelan though, I mean, I know there had to be a scapegoat, but still...
Poor Aden. Jerk, b%^#$. She better not try anything like that with James or I'm gonna have to open up a can of whoop-@$$.
Please update as soon as you can. I'm anxious to know what happens next.