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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Keep them coming is almost (I think *sigh) in a very important pick..
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm reviewing I'm reviewing lol. Can't wait to see where you will take this next. Am still trying to figure out who the spy is. Will Hermione figure out that the younger staff are a part of the Unseen??? I enjoyed reading as usual. Keep up the good work.
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol that was great and you are right they are sexy and wolf paly time is allway good to have ... and will mione and sev figure out how who is trying to hurt them .. please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm taking this by sections:
HERMIONE: I LOVE that Hermione's smarts will not be wasted. I was waiting for her to make the connection and just jump right in like the old Hermione - YEAH, she's BAAAACK. HOT! Snape is usually more observant...what's up with that? Come on Sev....it's your damn school. Get on the ball! Think like . . . well . . . SNAPE!
MASTER/JAMES: You really have me hooked here, who is the master? I want to say Lucius but I think it might be too obvious and you don't do obvious...you do "walking on a rug, pulling it under your feet then, crap, that's not even a rug". I know you left clues and I'm working it out in my brain. James is such the leader and I love how he's taking on the weight of the world on his shoulders. But he's made connections despite not knowing how and who the spy is. He needs to think more deviously - and not assume the students are innocent. Also, has he given any thought to his beloved Draca? I think he'd go BALLISTIC if anything happened to her.
LYCANS: Damn, the skull fuck line was fantastic. I love the connection between the lycans...they are so wonderful together...you have the makings of a pack here. The transformation was well-written and did I sense Rhea liking our hottie Phelan? mmm mmm good.
DRACO: thanks for responding that he won't be a mushy softy....kill me now if he is. I love hot, dommish, Slytherin Draco (coupled with the fact that perhaps he hasn't had sex in a bit since he's single and not the type to just sleep with any slag)....oh, can I be Hermione.... :-)
EXCELLENT CHAPPIE!
HERMIONE: I LOVE that Hermione's smarts will not be wasted. I was waiting for her to make the connection and just jump right in like the old Hermione - YEAH, she's BAAAACK. HOT! Snape is usually more observant...what's up with that? Come on Sev....it's your damn school. Get on the ball! Think like . . . well . . . SNAPE!
MASTER/JAMES: You really have me hooked here, who is the master? I want to say Lucius but I think it might be too obvious and you don't do obvious...you do "walking on a rug, pulling it under your feet then, crap, that's not even a rug". I know you left clues and I'm working it out in my brain. James is such the leader and I love how he's taking on the weight of the world on his shoulders. But he's made connections despite not knowing how and who the spy is. He needs to think more deviously - and not assume the students are innocent. Also, has he given any thought to his beloved Draca? I think he'd go BALLISTIC if anything happened to her.
LYCANS: Damn, the skull fuck line was fantastic. I love the connection between the lycans...they are so wonderful together...you have the makings of a pack here. The transformation was well-written and did I sense Rhea liking our hottie Phelan? mmm mmm good.
DRACO: thanks for responding that he won't be a mushy softy....kill me now if he is. I love hot, dommish, Slytherin Draco (coupled with the fact that perhaps he hasn't had sex in a bit since he's single and not the type to just sleep with any slag)....oh, can I be Hermione.... :-)
EXCELLENT CHAPPIE!
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's been a long time since I read this fic! I thought you'd forgotten to update for us all!
Well, I actually like wolves play time. It gave the new light about werewolves things in fic. Also, will it be anything blossom between Rhea & Prof. Greyback? Hehe. That would be lovely.
Overall, I like this latest chapter and looking for more update!
Well, I actually like wolves play time. It gave the new light about werewolves things in fic. Also, will it be anything blossom between Rhea & Prof. Greyback? Hehe. That would be lovely.
Overall, I like this latest chapter and looking for more update!
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June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohh man wha is james going to do .. please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this nervous Draco but don't let him get mushy damn it. Oh Hermione, he's not Ron...
WTF? Why are my Unseen hotties getting their asses kicked. I protest in their name? I hope everyone is okay.
WTF? Why are my Unseen hotties getting their asses kicked. I protest in their name? I hope everyone is okay.
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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh MY giddy goodness you're back!! *squealsss*
I was so surprised to see this updated, and happy too!
I liked this chapter, its advancing on everything. I just wish I could understand why taking down the Unseen is so important.
I enjoy having the mystery though. It keep my interest, because I NEED to know what happens. I'm such a curious little one!!
Well I'm glad to hear your feeling better and I hope you continue writing.
xoxo
dM
I was so surprised to see this updated, and happy too!
I liked this chapter, its advancing on everything. I just wish I could understand why taking down the Unseen is so important.
I enjoy having the mystery though. It keep my interest, because I NEED to know what happens. I'm such a curious little one!!
Well I'm glad to hear your feeling better and I hope you continue writing.
xoxo
dM
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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait until you update again. I'm really enjoying your story and the characters. Keep up the good work.
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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW I love James and what he did for Hermione, I love Draca/James pair, and all the others but we need some cracking up here... Poor Harry he feels so guilty of what James had bee through! Please do not make us wait for long and keep them coming.