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Oooh, I'm sorry Draco! Didn't mean to hurt feelings or step on toes! ;)
I really liked his appearance in this chapter, I like that he apologized to Hermione. Can't wait for more - from James and the Unseen, AND Draco!

Yesss! I really liked this chapter, it was very well written!
Aaand, I'm actually more interested in James and the rest of the Unseen, than I am in Draco right now... Huh, who'da thunk it. :)

wow that was awsome ... please please update soon .. later for now

angel

What a great chap... there is sooo much that i want to review but i am not sure that i will get it all in here... great job btw i love the way you write.. ok so on with the review... first... poor james... i am still so confused as to why harry would treat him that way but after reading a little of what happened i think harry feels guilty and blames himself for james and that is oozing out into his relationship with his son... hmmm so bella has made an appearance.... and is she bad??? is she good??? probably bad but i can never be too sure when reading one of your stories you seem to surprise us.. ok so they were testing and doing things to kids... could the other boy be dracos child??? next so hermione came to james for help i think that is where i would go as well... i am sure that she feels safe with him... god ron is a dick.. he was going to beat her right after she got home what an ass oh i hope he gets his..... i hope james lights his ass on fire... ok and that was very interesting about how the unseen was brought about.. they each want to make a new name for themselves that is interesting.... and i liked how you gave us a little glimpse of how they trained... so james is going to hogwarts, i wonder how you will throw draco into this.... i was wondering if he could be the leader of the unseen he always seemed like the type that would enjoy being called master... but after reading this could it be dumbledore i mean he always seemed to have a way of speaking in a way that made you think he knew more then he was telling and the way that the 'master' was talking it sounds like he knew of something that was happening.... i am looking forward to james going to hogwarts this should be really interesting... god i can not believe ron would not allow hermione to eat... ass.... ok great chap PLEASE update soon i cannot wait to learn more on who the 'master' is...

Wow, that's all there is to it...

hmm, you have me interested. I cant wait for another chapter.

that was just awesome!

AWESOME!!!! I want more more more!!!! like James is Awesome haha wow My speech amaze me but what I mean to say is I like the story very much and so far James Potter has become a fantasy on my mind ^_^ well take care
and update soon

Love
Lola

i really hate ron. great chap!

yeah you updated... james is very perceptive... and harry is blind he does not see what is right in front of him.... hopefully ginny or someone will be able to help hermione get out her mess of a marriage... i am interested to see how draco comes into this and i am excited to see more of james group and what they are doing at hogwarts.. great job... i can not wait for the update