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by Kooldragon400

schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on now! That's Cruel with a huge capital C, and Have i told you I hate Ronald Bilius Weasley as of now, my poor little dragon, *I Love You JAMES!!!* I will kill that fucking carrot top, I hope Hermione uses her over grown brain this time (bad man picker the poor thing) and well I love the chapter as always (I can't really get enough, it's just too juicy) well update soon, take care ( and James I'll be there)
'til next time

Love
Lola
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! When I first read the first chapter I was like "wow, this story is going to be very very interesting!" I rarely read fan fiction that starts with next generation point of view (I mean by story telling from younger side) especially when it's not Draco & Hermione's children and I'm very glad that you make Ron a git! and there's no child between him and Hermione. I like your story line so far and I'm so impatient for next chapter!

I hope James will get out of that and someone will come to Hermione's rescue soon! Hope Draco will appear more!
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DragonFyre....

This is the first time i have yet to read this story. (i still have yet to finish your previous story - which i plan to do in the bext few days) This is a very unique story and i can't wait to see where your rather brilliantly creative mind takes it....

Keep up the good work!!

Lady B*
person smmz79
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YEAHHHH i am sooo excited about your update... oh wow ron really is a dick... ok so i really like the connection between hermione and james.. i think he needs her in his life as a strong family member that trusts him i know that ginny loves him but she is being pulled in so many directions there is only so much she can do... ok so james sent four patronuses hmm i wonder well I think that he sent them to his friends because i doubt he would send it to his father because harry does not know what has been happening to hermione and i think he would more than likely lead ron to her without knowing what he was doing... wow i can not believe you left us on a cliff... PLEASE update soon i am dying to know what happens... i doubt hermione will open the door for ron but he may be able to persuade her.. i doubt he will let her know that it is him... hmmm..... i was thinking more on this master stuff... how coincidental is it that draco is working at hogwarts too? is there a connection there or is it really coincidental? i think that it is lucius though because of some of the things that you wrote in the last chap, and it is not that the bits were really long just little glimpses but something just stuck with me
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Tooooooo short!
Very mean cliffie!
GREAT chapter!

Annnnd, Draco can tie me up and use some minty chocolate any day he wants!!! :D hahaha!

Update, fast, please! As fast as you possibly can! I'm desperate to know how James fares, he's just GOT to be ok! And 'Mione, DON'T YOU DARE OPEN THAT DOORRRRR!!!!
person Lifvared
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Cliff Hanger*! I hope this story will be as good as "Upside Down* I really enjoyed that one Lol! Ruby was great! Anyways... Why did you do that to the poor James, I was hoping for him to kick Ron's ass for being such an ass***! But anyways is your story, but please I beg you don't let Ron get to Hermione! Pwease!!! Keep on with the good work!
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Update! I love of how this story is beginning to come together. Keep up the good work!
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWW!! I love it, its way too cute. James will you be my valentine?? *dropping on one knee* he's so manly and protective and Hermione will teach at Hogwarts and Draco too and ohh I want steamy sex and cuteness oh well I simply love it, update soon and take lots of care

Love
Lola
person smmz79
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow another great chap... i love how intuitive james is.... i laughed so hard at snape and dracos banter that was quite funny... nice bit of history to catch us up in here... so draco is going to be the history of magic professor.... hmmm your right i am not sure that this angle has been done before!!! I loved his apology and the proof of his changed outlook... no long speeches or drawn out explanations... well done!!!! loved this chap... oh and i am definitely interested in seeing what ron is doing??? oh and maybe another hint as to the master??? hmm i wonder about lucius could he have something to do with the master???
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is fabulous, I'm really looking forward to getting to know the other members of the unseen, have an inkling who the master is but I'll wait to see if I'm right. Same for the relationship between Harry and James, bless em. James is in another story of yours?

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