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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was painfully arousing. It was beautiful and I loved it. Thank you.
~Mia~
~Mia~
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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah! That was GREAT! *satisfied sigh* Your Hermione is always such a go-getter! I love her! And Lucius is so....oh man! HOT! HOT! HOT! Fabulous piece here! :)
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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really don't mind where your muse takes you, I delight in whatever she chooses to help you deliver. And whew!!!! Do you deliver!!!!!! That was magnificently delish. There was no doubt that the passion really flared between them - and I love how Hermione just had to 'test the theory a few times'. LMAO And your ending, oh how I loved the comedic twist of them getting caught kissing passionately between the shelves of Flourish and Blotts. Sheer brilliance, my dear! :)
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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant - just what was called for in between updates for other stories! thank you and please can we have some more??!
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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS FUCKING AMAZING! HOW HOT! It is no wonder you can't concentrate with Lucius running around in your head. I wouldn't be able to concentrate if that was in my head either. I would have gone mad! MORE LUCIUS! I DEMAND it! *looks around cautiously* Please! Oh please more Lucius fanfiction! Please. *hands held toawrd computer in importunate gesture*
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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You really need to reprimand Lucius he is such an attention whore. But really who can blame him or you. The man begs to be written. Great ficlet, Trying to be patient and wait for the next Severus story but sometimes its the waiting that kills ya. Well done!!!!!
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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do not think that there is another author doing one-shots as well as you do! Seriously, we get enough of a background to buy into the characters; and into the lemons. Great job (although I am waiting for your next Severus and Hermione tale!)
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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, aside from the fact that Hermione lived with the hot wizard for five years and didn't want to jump his bones. IS SHE CRAZY?? That strained credulity to the limits (or maybe I'm just terribly jealous), but otherwise, what a sweet, warm and loving story. I do rather like that Lucius could maintain a happy, contented relationship with Hermione and learn to enjoy living a normal life after the horror of Voldemort. Then it was finally time for both of them to meld more than their minds and the result was explosive.
Hot and sweet!
Hot and sweet!
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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another Severus story would be nice, but I am not complaining about getting some more Lucius! Great work!
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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, lovely, lovely. Maybe this is more like foreplay for the big build up for your Severus story? Can't wait to see that!