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for Band of the Fallen Angels

by sybersnake

schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just found your fic and love it after reading. Nice plotwork, just need to clean up the word usage, like: quite (It is quite enough that I know you...) when it should be quit (I quit this lousy job!). You can always someone you know or someone on the site to be a beta-reader for you. I love any fic that features Severus Snape and I eagerly look forward to your next chapter!
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A Friendly Reminder

Just thought I'd leave you a note to let you know your disclaimer is lacking. According to the Terms of Service you need to include that you are in fact making no money from writing this story, and that you do not own the people involved. Also it helps if you specify the fandom you are writing about.

Even though this story is about fictional characters, it needs to be known that they are not yours and you
person qwerty
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So Severus and Lucius are actually brothers??!