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this is getting good i like the fact that you're bringing in luna some how i see her with them. so could you please e-mail me when you update.

This is the first of Your stories I have read, and I am enjoying it VERY much. I am new to this site, and I would LOVE to know how to get notices of favorite stories being updated.....Like THIS One!! Harry and Luna is quite a refreshing change!!

Awesome! Can't wait for more! I'm not usually into the M/M/F thing, but when it involves Luna and Snarry? How can I not? Oh, and Luna should totally get pregnant and add a little girl to the family <3

-faithful reader, HINE

Oh yes! Go for it.

Awesome start to the sequel. Hopefully it will be as long as the original!
Great chapter!

Love it, though it worries me how things are going to be at the beginning when Luna does come to play as Harry's new sub, will he be ignoring Sev for a while or not? Hope not, Sev's been through enough, to have to go through feeling as being discarded as last night's trash!

Please update chapter 2 soon ^_^

Jan

I can't wait to see how you're gonna develop this..we already see hints, but I can't wait to see how they all fit together and if there are any kinks, tee-hee, that need to be ironed out. I really loved the writing in this chapter, the flow, and the feelings conveyed by Harry about Luna to Severus...and Sev understanding before Harry even saying anything. Luna's loneliness is really apparent, but how beautiful is it that she let Harry go because of love and hopefully love will bring him back, as well as some other things : ) You never see this threesome, so I'm really excited to see them all together. please continue and soon.