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for Behind the Closed Doors

by elibdally

person VictoriaHammer
schedule March 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
More, please! Fabulous buildup, now let's get to the action!! 😉
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love it. Can't wait for new chapter :)
The story is very interesting, i've never read something like this before. I love your Lucius, and the way he said he will never raise his hand on her- I think he could say something like that, because (like you) I think he loves his wife very much. JKR made it clear, i think.
hope for new chapter soon
love
Justyna
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i agree that lucius is a family man and loves his wife! I never have read a Lucius/Narissa FF and I love This one!!! Im going to go find some more...
person whogirl
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Someone mentioned "A Black Mistake" which got me interested in the LM/NB ship, and I really like this fic and how you've expanded the concept of Narcissa being forced into this marriage, and her mindset seems realistic for someone brought up in her type of society. The jump from Hogwarts to after it is a little hard to follow, but I like the new chapter that takes place in her sixth year. I'd love to read more :)
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please continue...this is the only lucius and narci story i really like besides gryffendorclutz's
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This really sucks that not too many leave reviews :(
person Phiana
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW, I loved the update to chapter 2, really added in the extra info and thickened the plot. I LOVE the latest chapter, the way you write is amazing you really capture his wicked side which i like a lot!!! Keep updating i love this story and not many people do LMNB fics so dont stop. Also i completely agree with you about getting GriffindorClutz to add to her fic. Honestly you two are my fav writers.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
x
person Phiana
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!! Keep going good L/N fics are hard to find and this has so much going for it! Well done!
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm absolutely gagging for an update! I'll make you a deal, tell me what you want to read and I'll write you made-especially-for-you one-shot if you'll update this one or 'Finito Incantatum'for me. What do you think?
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please keep updating. I know how frustrating the lack of reviews can be, but please don't abandon this fic.
J.