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Love the easy going Draco. Can't wait to see where this relationship with Snape goes. Looking forward to more. Well done!!!!

My dearest,

You're going to have to do better than that if you expect to keep me hooked. Weekly updates? Pish posh. Surely you can push them out faster than that.

This chapter was interesting, though not as exhilarating as I'd hoped. (Was hoping maybe Snape would accompany her shopping.) Though I am looking forward to reading more. (If I'm being a bit mean, I do apologize, I'm testing the waters out, since the review boards on my own story have burst into a Jerry Springer Pandemonium, I'm trying to see if it's really as outrageous as it seems. It's not.) But please, do try for more frequent updates? This story has great potential!!

~CC

A great chapter. I think it's nice to see Draco actually wanting to be around Hermione. I am glad that he has changed. I look forward to reading more.

Just finished ch.3, and I STILL like it. I don't know if you are American or not, but the 'Zambini' thing bothered me a bit; made me think of the zamboni at a hockey game. Even so, it's very good. Are you sure this is your first fic?

This is great fun - I look forward to reading more! I like the wierd twist to get it started, though you probably need to be careful about having too much description in random flashbacks. Leave us to do a little of the work and you'll bring up the suspense because we're in the same spot as Hermione. A hard act to balance - you're doing well so far.

Ha! Harry lost all his Gryffindor courage. And the dead faint... too funny.

Well I like this a lot. I can't wait for more. I'm wondering if your wizarding world allows for divorces or if this is permanent, or just what the deal is exactly. One more thing though. Blaise's name is ZABINI not ZAMBINI. Not to worry, apparently it's a common mistake made. Anyway, just thought I'd point that out. I can't wait for more!

Oh lordy loo! Who gives a rat's patootie about Blaise & Draco??? I know I don't. Personally, they can go play hide the wand all they want, but if it continues to muck up me finding out more about what's going on with Hermione and Severus I'm going to hide a wand so far up their-- nevermind, I'll be polite.

Congratulations on the point of view shifts, Hermione's voice is well developed and consistent. Draco, on the other hand, seems to waver in his consistency, though as he is merely a side show of entertainment to this story, I don't mind as much.

You've certainly sparked my curiosity and kudos for getting two chapters out between now and when I read last. It is frustrating to wait for updates (as a writer who constantly sees reviews that say "where the bleepin' blank is our update?" I know.:-p ) But overall, I am very pleased with the direction this is taking.

Keep up the good work!

~CC

I like it. Your writing is gret and is quit detailed without getting bogged down. The only thin I have to say is I think Bliases las name is spelled Zabini. Looking forward to more. Well done!!!!!

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more. I am curious though, did you purposely make Blaise's last name Zambini? I think that Zabini would be better.