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for While You Were Sleeping

by missgranger

person Jullsy
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It's pity that you stopped to post. Won't you continue the story?
person kitty08
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohh finally Severus and Hermione are getting closer. i am so happy! please update soon!!
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. i hope you post again soon.
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
missgranger,

I do insist that you desist in sputtering forth such short nonsense. You cannot simply toss us this little bit of emotional foolery and expect us to be satisfied. And to have Severus turn up at the cemetery to comfort her, goodness.

I impatiently wait your update. Tell your boss to shove it and that you simply have better things to do.

~CC
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story is going great. But one thing a CHECK is what you cash and a CHEEK is part of your face. Just thought to let you know. Good story. Please update soon.
person neelix
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh.... I am a little in love with Severus in this story already... please update as soon as you can :)
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more.
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would have to say that was a beautiful ending to this chapter. I could feel the warmth she felt being in his arms.


update soon.
person Kimjo2
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
intiguing start. i'm looking forward to seeing how this developes. thanks so much
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please udpate soon.