rate_review Reviews

Wow! That was a seriously long chapter! Or is it a oneshot? I really enjoyed it, nothing much to find fault with. I liked the way you built up Harry's sense of desepration and frustration; I wanted to scream at everyone to be nicer to him! The emotion really came through. Perhaps you could have more of Harry's relationship with Cedric? I know its not good to just focus completely on the developing relationship so that it seems like their in a wee bubble, but I felt that this story erred on the side of caution that way. Their feelings just kinda jumped out of nowhere, but hey, I still loved it! :) I hope that there will be more, and if there is then could you please send me an email to notify me? My address is mypheonixfire@hotmail.com Thank you for sharing your wonderful work! There's not enough good Harry/Cerdic fics out there.

Hi,

I just wanted to comment on this lovely story, which was quite a read. I think you kept both Harry and Cedric very well in character and the dialogue also flowed very well. I have to admit, I've never really been into Harry/Cedric, but your story definitely made me change my view on it! Hope you will consider a sequel,

Alaine.

Continune, please plesase continue this! It's wonderful and I'm dying to know what happens next.