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by CherryStarburst

person LadyPiro
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic! Poor Sirius! Please update 'Pretty Kitty' soon!
person Milva
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, all this tail-plays were hot! I love kitty fictions ^^
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was awsome! i really enjoyed it. but some how my stories i write don't come out as good as the ones posted so i keep my stories to myself i don't think i could do your challange due to the fact that i'm in a bashing sort of mood and mpreg as well its so kool how someone could come up with that its so fasinating. oh well enjoyed this story!
person HarryVik
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!! I want to read more from you, be it Harry!cat or something else. I love your work.

Still one question. Harry is, if I'm not wrong, 15 in here. How is it then that he could do a concealing charm? Gred and Forg I can understand, they are of age, but Harry isn't.

"...a concealing charm on his trousers to hide his humiliating erection which just refused to go down."
person Jan
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very deliciously yummy!!! Great writing ^_^

Jan
person wynja
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I looooved this oneshot! Totally hot! And I can see Harry wearing the Twins out if this had continued... *grin* Thanks for sharing!
person Uni-Verse
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Abosolutly loved it!
It was hot the way the twins helped out Harry with his "little problem"!
And poor Sirius that was so mean, but funny at the same time because i think he did know that Harry had gone into heat.