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awwwww Loved this chapter, ok points to b made like the relationship and how its movin hopefully they can build some sorta foundation b4 the world cums down on them *signs*. I love the fact that Harry was quick to tell his friends He supports Draco's beliefs as he has takein the tyme to get informed and they are actin like idiots not gettin the information dats presented cuz Malfoy is the leader of it ~ shakes my head ~ Also Wat the blip is up wit Tonks!!!!!! if I didn't know better I would think she was helpin with the attacks lol I mean she has a relationship with Remus the most complacent man who has an animal in him to tell if someone is real or fake y is she trippin ~ shakes my head ~ o well u will get to that I know I have to b patient :) ~ Mwah another bril chapter

You do not need to be a philospher to write good stories, but you have to be in touch with reality - which you are. I agree about fiction being the place where thoughts can be voiced in hypothetical situations Look at Dickens, for instance, and the way he underlined the hypocrisy and horrible living conditions of the poor in his stories. Looking forward to the next episode. I am more of an escapist writer myself.

Your story is unlike anything that I've ever read and the entire concept really intrigues me. Thank you for writing a lovely story where the characters are fleshed out from the beginning but still grow as the chapters progress. I've always thought that Hermione was thoroughly stuck in her beliefs and it drives me nuts when people write Harry the same way, yet Harry and Draco are still together in this oddly unexplained, loving relationship. I check back every day just hoping that there will be a new chapter from you. I also must admit that this story has sparked more than a couple plot bunnies in my head. Been a while since a story (especially a WIP) did that. Looks like it may be time for me to start writing again.
Keep up the wonderful work! *hugs*

So so sooooo need chapter 9!!!

nice soothin chapter and wrap up of Harry's info on wat Draco is tryin to perserv ~ ano short review but I have to run wanted to give u a hug for the chapter tho quite roll out on chapter 8 so *HUGS*

Chapter eight is very nice and I mean that sincerely! Anna is OK and it's obvious she and Harry adore each other. Helene and Harry have started over and look to become good friends. Harry and Draco's relationship has taken a positive step forward. I know that there is still a crazed killer on the loose, bigotry to overcome, and Ron is still a jerk, but for this short space in time, everything is right. Granted, it will probably all go to hell in chapter nine, but it was nice to get a small glimpse of what life should be (and hopefully will be)like for Draco and Harry.

You make some very good political points pertinent to the real world as well as to our imaginary one.

How do we live in a pruralistic society allowing variance without falling apart? How do we encourage communities to have a separate identity and yet be part of the whole community? Too much tolerance leads to middle of the road apathy? Too little and we see terrible dictaorial r

I could never be disappointed in this fic...
I'm so excited what happened at the end of this chapter - Draco & Harry.
I'm so hooked and I cant enough.
And again....I cant wait to read more.

As with chapter three, chapter seven is proving difficult to review without going into hyper cheerleader mode, but I'll give it a shot. This chapter is beyond impressive. Firstly, it is a balm for my poor over wrought nerves; chapter s1x packed quite a punch! Secondly, Remus' explaination of Resonance and some of the pure blood customs concerning it was utter fascinating! There was alot of information imparted, between that and the details of how Anna became Draco and Sirius' daughter, but never once was it confusing or feel overwhelming. It's obvious that you've put in a lot of thought and effort into building the foundation of your story. Once again, you have delivered an masterly crafted chapter!

ok I am so grateful dat my assumption was grossly incorrect about Sirus lol I was like O.O dang just kill a puppy is nicer lmao... and the explanation of the dance so great really wish I could go now haha u r ryte the weasleys for pure bloods didn't teach thier kids nuthin reali about magic how crazy is dat lol anyway ty for the update cant wait for more. u deserve this kiss ~ mwah