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by LyonsOwn

person applesauce_N_soysauce
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter...and again, cant wait to read more.
person Rakel
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Absolutely perfect! Ron and Seamus getting taken down a peg or two was a beautiful sight. Hetty's verbal slap down was pure poetry! Good on Harry, as well, for telling Hermione off. Were he gets his patience, I'll never know.
The political element that was introduced in the last chapter and continued in this one has piqued my interest. Will you be bringing Arthur in anytime soon to get his point of view?
On the subject of Darco and Harry's relationship, I think that you are handling that just fine. To have them rush would not fit well with the tone of the story nor the personalities that you have gifted them.
person Rakel
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Thank you for another well written and enlightening chapter! I was impressed with Harry's speech. Hopefully, he won't receive too many Howlers. Although I've bad mouthed Ron a few times and wouldn't mind someone kicking his ass, I honestly hope that he stands behind Harry this time. I guess we'll find out soon enough!
person Kaen
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing!
person applesauce_N_soysauce
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
....whoop...whoop....
I so love the way this fic is heading.
So much sincerity and trust between these two...I love it.
I cant wait to read more between these two...going forward.
person LilCas
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please i like keep writing!! I love how you Have draco and Harry in this story!
person Toddy
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another interesting episode. I think there was an amount of drum beating going on?
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo can't wait for chapter 11!!! I'm sooo addicted to this story!!!
person Rakel
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Chapter nine was very enjoyable; the advancement of Harry and Draco's relationship is always a good thing! I've taken the hint and am bracing myself for chapter ten.
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I soooo loved this chapter and now just have to have chapter 10!!!