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Wooohooo! Draco won! *waves Slytherin flag* Also, that little hint of Ron and Hermione's reaction to Harry's 'allegiance* to Renaissance was more than a little amusing. And Draco is probably more brilliant than Hermione, glad I'm not only one to realize that.

Oh no...Draco is abducted.
The inner magic in Harry - a Snake....WOW.
Love it all.
Cant wait to read more...
I need more.

Holy crap! I don't know if I'm eager or afraid to see Harry unleashed. I can't believe that guy was working in Malfoy's company.
Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one!

Another great chapter and I can not wait for Harry to catch the bad guy!

Sooo soooo soooo love this!!! I'm dying for chapter 16!!!

Excellent job as always, thank you for posting once more. Please do so again at your earliest convenience.

An excellent story that has captivated me from the summary. I waited to review until I read the 14 current chapters in their entirety. I'm so excited for an update especially with the cliffhanger you left your faithful readers with. I was also curious: how do you pronounce the words "sie" and "hir"? I've been attentive to the words, but I don't know if I'm saying them correctly to myself. I would like to commend your knowledge concerning police tactics and terminology, especially in the wizarding world. You really broadened the ideas about Dumbledore and the teachings of Hogwarts. I'm disheartened, in a way, that J.K. Rowling didn't attack her novels with the same objectivity you have. You are clear in your conviction, and just as clear with the counter-point. You have REALLY done your research well and still maintain a captivating and engaging story. I normally don't read "gender-bender" type stories, but your talent far outshines many of the fan-fiction stories I've read and I've really come to fall in love with these characters all over again. I will tell you that it's been driving me crazy thinking about who Anne's birth parents are...I have a sneaking suspicion that those people who know about Anne and the circumstances surrounding her birth and life are the ones responsible for the killings.

I would like to add that you do a fantastic job of keeping the story flowing in a fashion similar to noir or femme fetal stories -- I will admit that I am still suspicious of Draco, even with the 14th chapter but only because he's always scheming about something. Draco is very much the femme fetal in this story and I adore his scenes with Harry tremendously. Harry is so composed and smart, but utterly falls to pieces around Draco. How sweet.

Thanks for writing! Please keep it up.
-Mike

Another great chapter and I can not wait for more!

The current version of the haiku is this:
"His heart's of the third
Their passion so misguided
Empathy yields peace"
Though I fear it may be too abstract.
Oh! And Luna will be a major feature, especially at the beginning.
I think it's really going to just more-or-less jump in right from the get-go. I'm not a huge fan of long, introductory yarns.
Scene 1: Gryffindor Common Room to Prefect's Bathroom, enter Luna

That's all you're getting right now!

PS. Loved the chapter, but I was a little confused as to whether or not Draco disappeared, then this last chapter was what happened before the disappearance or if sie disappeared, then came back and the latest chapter happened. Did I miss something in my excitement that there was more to read? I'm impressed that the Resonance had Draco so entranced that sie didn't comment on Harry ripping hir robes. :-D

AWESOME STORY!!! Gives me the tinglies...tehe. But can you describe to me Draco's anatomy. Doe sie have a female sex organ and a male one?