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for Renaissance

by LyonsOwn

schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, we can officially stay friends since you didn't let hir die! :-)

Chapter one for me, though relatively short, is done. I've made a noticeable tweak in what we talked about, but I think it will work nicely.

I really hope that you're feeling better because I miss talking to you!

Can't wait for the next chapter. ~LJL
person qwerty
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw. Blaise's speech at the end was so heart-warming!
Great chapter! I'm glad that Draco won't sustain any major damage.
Keep going!
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was really no problem to review every chapter - you certainly deserved it. The highlights of this chapter were when Draco rolled hir eyes in the beginning, and when sie gave 'Judas' that enjoyable dressing down. And I'm pretty evil for saying this, but I love tortured Draco (as you can tell from my story, lol) and I think you pulled it off really well. I'm just waiting for the rescue and TLC to commence (if it does, lol). As always, really good chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
person Jeanne
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Neeeeeeed next chapter!!!
I just hope that Draco's bought hirself enough time for Harry to find hir.
Does Anna know that her vama has disappeared? If so, I'd like to know how she's taking it. Maybe Harry can comfort her some. That would be a nice little interlude, but just an idea!
The haiku's done and part 1 of chapter 1 is almost done. Just to keep you updated.
Keep up the great work and I hope you're feeling better! :-) ~LJL
person applesauce_N_soysauce
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAhhhhhhhh.....
...you leave me here??
...with such horror...??
haha.

...cant wait to read more.
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 18!!! Hurry Harry!!!
person poohbear74
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not really but I hope so and this is another great chapter.
person qwerty
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your review response keeps me thinking that we readers don't have everything figured out quite yet... what twist are you going to throw at us this time?
Well-written chapter. I love the speech that Draco gave at the end in true Malfoy-form. Bravo that he could still pull that off after all that torturing.
Keep going!
person MewMew2
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! You've got my eyes glued to the computer screen. Please update once more when you have the chance!
person Dezra
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes Harry, Hurry!