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Snape was right in the canon; Hermione is really an insufferable know-it-all.
Poor Anna. She's been through so much! I cannot wait for Draco to get better!
Great job! Keep going!

Wow! This story made me scream cry and laugh uproariously. It also made me think about the different views and biases people are raised with. This story is richly layered with detail, suspense and drama. It transcends the normal stereotypes and sees to the heart of human emotion. Tonks's potrayal is particularly poignant and I look forward to seeing her reactions to the restructuring and how it effects them all. The chapter about Sirius was a little hard to take at first (Not going to lie I got nauseous and almost gave up on the story after that particular revelation) but subsequent explanations made more sense and were appropriate. I look forward to the next chapter and only wish I had a better way of keeping up with it when you update.

this is very interesting,however the "sie" and "hir" are VERY irritating,that's why I won't read further.It's ridiculous even if you didn't make that up. Just...lame.

Soooo need chapter 19!!!!

ok finally read chapters 17 & 18 sheesh I'm behind but I'm glad I waited and read both becuz u would have died if u left me hangin like dat lol any who overall stella chapters I especially like the way Harry got Jude lmao ...I can understand his anger for sure ... and to hear wat almost happened to Anne ...smh some ppl ...I wanted to go kill em myself ... but TY Draco is gonna b iight cant wait for 19 u did gud love ~ mwah and a whole plate of cookies ( chocolate chip ) ;)

I sat down and read this whole story at one time- and I just love it! Very well written and a great story. Can't wait for what's next.

Wonderfully done...I just absolutely love this fic.
Im so glad Draco was saved...
Cant wait to read more.

Firstly, let me say this is an excellent story, certainly good enough to check up on every couple days (and you are definitely the most talented faithful updater I have ever followed). Your writing is believable and fluid, it is obvious you care about and take a good amount of pride in your writing. The only inaccuracy I have come across is a tiny thing, in chapter 12. You have a very well argued point with Abraham's sacrifice, unfortunately, this appears in the old testament. The disconnect is that you then identify the killer as paralleled by Judas, a specifically New Testament figure. The easiest fix is that you introduce Abraham's sacrifice of Isaac as a Judeo-Christian idea, not just a Christian. From there, you can work through maybe one or two clues to reach the specifically Christian influence, and from there, Judas.

But, again, in characterization, continuity, and style, your writing is clever, intelligent, believable, and (most important and without question) yours. No one else could have written this story and that's what keeps me coming back. I'm an infrequent reviewer due to the fact that people have misinterpreted my comments as insulting, but I got the feeling you would want to know your readers' confusion, so that you can choose to proceed with many points of view, rather than merely your own. And really, a paltry few paragraphs in an extensive story? You're doing a great job, I'm only nitpicking because you give me nothing to complain about :)

Thank you so much for updating. Excellent job on making the list of injuries realistic as well as Anna's trauma. Please continue to update in a timely manner when convenient for you.

Another great chapter and I hope everything goes well for too.