rate_review Reviews

Good for McGonagal and for Hetty. There is nothing wrong with being proud of who you are and where you come from. The Gryffindors and the Light side never understood that. Love this story. Hope to see more.

Waaa! Write more now! Lol.

I like a good fic that knocks people off their high horse...which Harry loves to climb up on every chance he gets, fan fiction and published books, lol.

A very impressive second chapter! I re-read the exchange between Helene and Harry; it's brilliant! I noticed it in the first chapter and it remains true for this one as well: you're quite skilled at fleshing out your characters. I really like Helene (and her sarcastic wit!)and hope she is more than just a minor character.

Almost feel sorry for Harry! Though he did bring that on himself! He needs to get it together! Personal feelings aside! Sooo need chapter 3!

Sooo need chapter 2!!!

If the first chapter is the measure by which to judge your story, I'll be following it to the very end. The writing is sharp and intelligent, and your characters well defined, especially since they've only been introduced. I'm intrigued with the idea for your story and look forward to learning more about the Triarii (and meeting Draco, of course). Your story is off to an excellent start!

It sounds like its going to be an interesting story. Please update soon.