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person Rakel
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Surprises?! You call them surprises? They were shocks! My head is still reeling. I knew Ron was a jerk, but I never thought he was that much of a bastard! Please, please promise that he will be subjected to public, physically painfull, and ego damaging humiliation in a future chapter!
On a calmer note, it is nice to see Poppy brought into the mix, although I wish it would have been under better circumstances. This chapter was dark, and a bit sinister, but never heavy-handed. Another well crafted chapter!
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved... Ron and Hermione are just sooo hipocritis... I truly don't like them at all, just because they dont like Draco they dont care the pain an sorow he and Ana sofer...
I realy wanna know what is this thing Harry and Draco have, and what is Ron and Hermione gonna react wend they find out that Harry is liking Draco...
Keep up the good work, and just remenber to update soon... hahaha
person applesauce_N_soysauce
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy-B-Poptarts ....wow, you got me good on this chapter.
I was all excited there for a bit, Draco letting Harry somewhat comfort him...and
POW! ....Rape ...my head is swimming.
Will this complicate things??
Im all like ....is this where Harry & Draco get closer...aaahhhh.
So many Q's ....cant wait to read more.
person Omizu
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter with an answer, but a new twist. I can't wait to read more.
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this fic... I dream with it... Can't wait for an update please do it soon
I wanna know ho Anna's parent are, and I also wanna know what is this thing with Draco and Harry...
Sorry for the bad gramar I'm form Brasil so...
Hope to see a update soon

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schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You got me!!! I soo need chapter 6!!! Harry knows how Draco feels about him thanks to Remus. And what's going on between them?
person Anon
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
no was well worth the small wait I really and trully love this story and to make Remus Anna's godparent!!!! O.O I was just as shocked as Potter lmao ur story is reali great and the pull between Potter & Malfoy huh? I love it!!!!!!! I cant wait for the next one ~ Hugs
person Rakel
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Now that was a chapter chocked full of surprises! I'm so glad that you've included Remus in your story; he's one of my favorite characters. I must admit, things between Harry and Draco are moving faster than I thought they would, but in no way does it feel forced. You have a real gift for writing naturally flowing dialogue. Thankfully, you update your story so quickly. I have so many questions! How and why are Remus and Minerva so close to Draco? What exactly is between Harry and Draco? Better yet, how is Ron going to react when he finds out?!
person Toddy
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a refreshing point of narrative, I love it. I'm still getting used to the personal pronouns though, but I can see where you are going with them. I take it that you had to add them to your spellchecker. Looking forward to the next episode.
person applesauce_N_soysauce
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heck ya...I'm sticking around...love this fic.
The shock....ooooo....my mind is going a in light-year speed on where this is going.
And I'm so glad that the shock was recognized by both parties.
Now...Remus...going on about the two...I was dieing-laughing.

I cant wait to read more.
...and theres more twist...??
Bring it on...cant wait.