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by LyonsOwn

schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really loving this story! I love your take on Wizarding hermaphrodites - it's very unique and interesting. I also enjoy Draco in this story - a minority, but proud of it and sie's a business mogul as well. And I'm glad that Harry's finally opening his pretty green eyes and taking a look at the world around him.

Can't wait to see how this develops. *Off to the next chapter*
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the bit with Remus... thinking he'd won a bet, lol. And I love Anna's character, kinda figured she'd take after hir vama.

*Off to the next chapter*
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was a really powerful chapter. I can't believe how pitiful and disgusting Ron and Hermione are being. To try and justify the acts of a rapist is sickening! There is no justification for something like that... they are sooo twisted and selfish to not see that.

Okay, time to cut this rant short. Really good chapter, though!

schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So I'm really glad to find out that Sirius wasn't a rapist, but that fact that Ron and Hermione were willing to defend him still rankles... I mean, jeez! Really good chapter though and some more interesting concepts - can't wait for the next update!
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, that I didint see it coming... But i have to admit I'm a little sad to know Anna is not Draco's biological daughter, I gess i just whanted Draco to have a child...
Anyway I can cant wait to see Hermione and Ron reactions... I think they will not like or suport Harry and Draco
person Dezra
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It sounds like she judges people just as fast as Harry.
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 8!!! I'm sooo relieved!!! But I still wonder who her parents were.
person applesauce_N_soysauce
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter...this one explained allot and was wonderfully written.
Im staying tuned for the next exciting new chapter to this tale you weaved.
I'm so hooked.
person Anon
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok a few things: in ur story I am gatherin u r not havin Sirius Related to Narcissa? and if u are well I can c the reason for Narcissa usin kreacher to spy on him and Harry as I would want to get revenge and y the crazy Bella would curse him as well would be a fittin revenge Black sytle :) if not well he is the only viable character I gather. Also Herionie Defender of House elves defending a rapist.... of a 14 yr old!!!!!! O.O I dont c it, would b where I swear she might start to question stuff if u know how her mind works lol, and Ron a pure Blood actin like a muggle born I mean I can see him as stubborn about how he hates But he must know about the Triad sum not to be so stupid really .... Anyway I say all of this to say I am so into the story I am ready to strangle some of ur characters lol..... Sooooo Great job ( thumbs up )
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 7!!! Oh poor Draco, Anna and Harry! My heart breaks for them!!!